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Fuck Me
Hello,
My name is Tim
I am a person with feelings
A person who is abused
A person who is misused
But I know this for sure…
I am certainly,
With out a doubt
A bent up crazy motherfucker with one thing in mind
That thing is a god damn bullet
A bullet called pain
Inflicted by those who said they love me
Fuck you
Fuck your lies
Fuck your well being
Fuck your very existance
When I start to write my flow
Everything starts to make sense
My own friends pity me
As I wallow in my own self pity
Insecure
Stoner
Pariah
All those words describe how I am
I am a social outkast
I am a stoner
I am the most insecure motherfucker out there
Fuck this write
Fuck I am such a shitty poet
And I didn't even know it.
~kissifthedevil
My name is Tim
I am a person with feelings
A person who is abused
A person who is misused
But I know this for sure…
I am certainly,
With out a doubt
A bent up crazy motherfucker with one thing in mind
That thing is a god damn bullet
A bullet called pain
Inflicted by those who said they love me
Fuck you
Fuck your lies
Fuck your well being
Fuck your very existance
When I start to write my flow
Everything starts to make sense
My own friends pity me
As I wallow in my own self pity
Insecure
Stoner
Pariah
All those words describe how I am
I am a social outkast
I am a stoner
I am the most insecure motherfucker out there
Fuck this write
Fuck I am such a shitty poet
And I didn't even know it.
~kissifthedevil
Published 19th Jun 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 19th Jun 2014 7:39am
19th Jun 2014 5:48am
My Friend......this hurt to read. Been where you're at many times. Look around there is someone else just like you that needs the same luv you do. Give them a chance to find and meet you. This is heartbreaking to me. :(
19th Jun 2014 7:41am
This is a community of people dealing with the same stuff, people like you and me. I felt your your poem and I've been there. Don't think you're alone Tim :/
19th Jun 2014 12:33pm
i feel how youdo . this poem is realy sad i think your an amazing person people are fucked up and people dont understand the pain they give i know how that feels more then anything .
your amazing at wrighting peoms so dont ever think there shit !
tim you been hurt and its understand able people are liers and usesers i know this thats why i dont make firends or tell anyone about me .
this poem althought its said its beautiful becuse you put your feelings in to it and thats why its beautiful if you ever need someone to talk to i am here always .
~Tamaura_NightAngel :)
your amazing at wrighting peoms so dont ever think there shit !
tim you been hurt and its understand able people are liers and usesers i know this thats why i dont make firends or tell anyone about me .
this poem althought its said its beautiful becuse you put your feelings in to it and thats why its beautiful if you ever need someone to talk to i am here always .
~Tamaura_NightAngel :)
25th Jun 2014 8:46am
I've been were you are, I know the feeling well. But don't ever doubt yourself. You are the strongest of those around you, and you'll pull through long before anyone else does. Wonderful poem of pain, and very beautiful.
I like your writing, and I hope to see more.
Thank you for an amazing read.
I like your writing, and I hope to see more.
Thank you for an amazing read.
27th Jun 2014 7:51pm
This poem expressed what many never find the words for. It's truthful and amazing. We are all here to support you. All the comments here above mine? Well they are you family yet get it. I get it. It's going to be tough sometimes but that's what you have all of us for.
Anonymous
14th Sep 2014 2:59pm
Although very sad, this is an extremely honest and well written poem. You have every right to wallow in self-pity, I would have done the same.
If this poem's content wasn't so painful, bitter & honest I would have suggested it be put to music in the form of a heavy metal track. No offence meant.
If this poem's content wasn't so painful, bitter & honest I would have suggested it be put to music in the form of a heavy metal track. No offence meant.
