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Please See Me
Walking down a dark and lonely path
Longing for the moment you truly see me
A man so damaged by the pain caused by others
You are lost in the dark under brush of your past
The deep wooded area that is your soul
Keeps you from seeing the woman I truly am
Open your eyes and take my outstretched hand
Don't judge me by the actions of another in your past
I'll help you cut away the thorns and thistles
Take just a moment in time to look my way
Trust isn't easy when life has been so rough
I truly understand how it feels to have pain so vast
Walk down the dark path with me
Im offering you understanding and my love
I cant wipe away your scars you have within
But I can give happiness that I know will last.
Longing for the moment you truly see me
A man so damaged by the pain caused by others
You are lost in the dark under brush of your past
The deep wooded area that is your soul
Keeps you from seeing the woman I truly am
Open your eyes and take my outstretched hand
Don't judge me by the actions of another in your past
I'll help you cut away the thorns and thistles
Take just a moment in time to look my way
Trust isn't easy when life has been so rough
I truly understand how it feels to have pain so vast
Walk down the dark path with me
Im offering you understanding and my love
I cant wipe away your scars you have within
But I can give happiness that I know will last.
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Re: Please See Me
11th Jun 2014 5:34pm
An excellent metaphor of emotional help! The first verse hits touched me on a very personal level. Wonderful piece you've written!
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re: Re: Please See Me
11th Jun 2014 11:46pm
Once again DJ u flatter me. Im glad that u cold see the meaning behind the words
Re: Please See Me
11th Jun 2014 7:56pm
Excellent piece sweets!!
Love the write!!
Adore your southern womanly ways!!
Great read!!
Sir Lancelott
Love the write!!
Adore your southern womanly ways!!
Great read!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Please See Me
11th Jun 2014 11:47pm
Re: Please See Me
12th Jun 2014 10:09pm
you must love this person in your poems deeply, to write such beautiful words, i hope he hears you hugs
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re: Re: Please See Me
14th Jun 2014 00:08am
This one is about somebody from n my past I cared very deeply about. Sadly they never conquered the shadows that weighed him down. I refused to b miserable with him. Thanx so much sweety. Big Hug back
Re: Please See Me
15th Jun 2014 2:18am
U can feel the pain u r feeling for him as u read it. We all could use somebody that cares that much n our lives. Great write
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Re: Please See Me
18th Jun 2014 9:36pm
Great poem and you're right some of us do live in our past. We don't trust and expect to be hurt once again. It takes awhile for them to open up, the question is, "Are they worth it?" Enjoyed.
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re: Re: Please See Me
19th Jun 2014 5:57pm
X thanx for ur take n insight. Yes we do have to ask ourselves that very ? along with many others. Sometimes u have to just walk away to stay sane
Re: Please See Me
Walking away isnt always the right thing for either person. Kind of depends on the willingness of both people to move forward n a healthier way. Thanx for giving me a read hun
Re: Please See Me
3rd Oct 2014 3:10am
Once again about the business of saving souls :) Your compassion inspires me. I am glad you chose a lighter, brighter path...you've seen enough misery.
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Re: Please See Me
15th Dec 2014 00:29am
Really beautiful. This shows a generosity of spirit, body and soul. You're a rare woman, Belle.
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