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The Glowing Guardian
Love
Rites sprinkle covering One made starlight
steeped within majestic reverence Holy might
"That which is below corresponds to that which is above" *
Ink lain imagery awash with life
bound by Heart coupled with mind
inferno
Knowledge extraordinaire scribe of Earth
traveler borne fleet of tongue
Give Her blue skies grabbing warmth in lilac radiant hue
pause upon bright eyes and gorgeous smile drawing closeness in
The iridescent feather touch sits assuredly owned between nimble fingers
catching everything the world so pours pooling every trickled stream
Constance She claims Herald for posterity worthy of righteous wing
tenderness My Dearest savior to Soul grip tightly Your glow
keep sight toward the sky Love it will never fall
for Atlas keeps his shoulder strong barring cleft from evertouch
walk past every rock infested snake path twirl upon meadow
Thy time flows precious float on along maple leaf way
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=frqPh7jsv0w
For Graces Comp. thread- DU Member Grace
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Re: The Glowing Guardian
8th Jun 2014 3:13pm
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8th Jun 2014 3:14pm
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Anonymous
8th Jun 2014 6:27pm
A beautiful tribute, to a great poet!
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re: Re: The Glowing Guardian
9th Jun 2014 00:55am
Thank You Dear Queen :D
I LOVED Your Write, such a Beautiful piece-Superb!!!
I LOVED Your Write, such a Beautiful piece-Superb!!!
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2014 11:27am
Thanks so much, dear Soul, for the kind words!!!
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Re: The Glowing Guardian
8th Jun 2014 10:09pm
((((((((((((((((Gabe)))))))))))) !!!
This is beautiful soul, nicely done my friend
really nice <3
Broomie Xo
This is beautiful soul, nicely done my friend
really nice <3
Broomie Xo
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re: Re: The Glowing Guardian
9th Jun 2014 00:58am
JACKIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...wait...
BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Thank You so very much!!!
...wait...
BROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Thank You so very much!!!
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9th Jun 2014 3:59am
((((((((((((((((((((((((((Soul))))))))))))))))))))))!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ") My brother <3
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Anonymous
9th Jun 2014 8:34am
that is just a beautiful tribute! Your writing is always so dreamily fantastical and takes the mind on a journey, this one takes it all the way :-)
good luck in the comp, Soula
peace
good luck in the comp, Soula
peace
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re: Re: The Glowing Guardian
9th Jun 2014 2:50pm
Thank You so much Dear Miki-You are VERY kind!!!
You are a soul I feel should have lived around the corner My Friend!!!
You are a soul I feel should have lived around the corner My Friend!!!
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2014 2:51pm
yeah, I think we'd have made great friends! I totally agree with you :)
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Re: The Glowing Guardian
10th Jun 2014 5:35pm
Soul!!
This was Beautiful and Gracious !
Your voice has such a lovely fanciful style. Your vision was a wonderfully, magnificent, magical tribute to the essence of our Dear friend.
Amazing!
This was Beautiful and Gracious !
Your voice has such a lovely fanciful style. Your vision was a wonderfully, magnificent, magical tribute to the essence of our Dear friend.
Amazing!
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re: Re: The Glowing Guardian
11th Jun 2014 00:45am
Awwwww thank You Dear Glynis-I hope all Our tribute bring Her smiles :)
Re: The Glowing Guardian
10th Jun 2014 8:24pm
Aww....this was a different spin on a tribute! Quite captivating and mesmerizing! Truly the perfect image, framing Grace nicely, Soul! Xo
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re: Re: The Glowing Guardian
11th Jun 2014 00:47am
I fear tribute Writes, I'm relieved You said a different spin lol :D
Thank You Dear Rain!!!
Thank You Dear Rain!!!
Re: The Glowing Guardian
11th Jun 2014 11:30pm
I was transported to thst fantastical land of magic I imagined as a child by your beautiful use of imagery.
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re: Re: The Glowing Guardian
11th Jun 2014 11:41pm
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12th Jun 2014 3:46am
Re: The Glowing Guardian
16th Jun 2014 2:30pm
This is a pleasure to read. I was puzzled as to why the title was "Glowing Guardian" until I thought about items found in the sky and their qualities.
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16th Jun 2014 4:10pm
Re: The Glowing Guardian
21st Jun 2014 2:56am
So many beautiful lines, Soulman, like "traveler borne fleet of tongue" and " Thy time flows precious float on along maple leaf way." I'm sure Grace is proud of the awesome and honest picture you painted of her.
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re: Re: The Glowing Guardian
23rd Jun 2014 00:31am
Humbled Tony-thank You Sir-You've been elusive round town Sir-Glad to see You roaming about!!!
Re: The Glowing Guardian
21st Jun 2014 4:45am
As I read this I can hear a voice in my heart reciting it.... (honestly)
That voice you dont hear but can feel!
This is art sir... pure art I must say...
That voice you dont hear but can feel!
This is art sir... pure art I must say...
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Re: The Glowing Guardian
21st Jun 2014 4:48am
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23rd Jun 2014 00:34am
I've always been a sucker for that line :D - Thanks for feeling it Cesar-means much from an emotive Poet such as Yourself!!!
Re: The Glowing Guardian
22nd Jun 2014 6:06pm
I believe you were so much inspired when you wrote this very beautiful piece because the lines are so completely beaming with radiance and so mesmerizing!
Congratulations Soul for such extra-ordinary piece of majestical proportions--so fitting for a very talented scribe.
@EngrVV
Congratulations Soul for such extra-ordinary piece of majestical proportions--so fitting for a very talented scribe.
@EngrVV
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re: Re: The Glowing Guardian
23rd Jun 2014 00:40am
Very Kind Engr-Thank You Buddy-Indeed She inspires me Much -All You Guys help me in so many ways-She helps My Heart as much as help guide me in DU :)
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1st Jul 2014 3:20am
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1st Jul 2014 2:11pm
Excellent-sometimes we find the things we need for little comforts-Thank You for Your Kindness!!!
Re: The Glowing Guardian
15th Jul 2014 00:55am
Great write about GRACE Bro. SOUL!!
The words you chose jelled so well!!
Love the read!!
INK by "Da MAN"!!!!
Sir Lancelott
The words you chose jelled so well!!
Love the read!!
INK by "Da MAN"!!!!
Sir Lancelott
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15th Jul 2014 4:17pm
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24th Jul 2014 7:32pm