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Fetich Seeker
I captured your heart and enslaved your brain
unlocking and unleashing the beast from within
giving you the right to release your pain
searching no more for your own selfish gain
I entered your life like a thief in the night
seeking and stealing all your thoughts that weren't right Knowing down deep the desires that taunt you the secrets you have how they must haunt you
I know who you are, do you know who I am
I am the one holding your hand
I am the Mistress who took your soul
I am she even as you grow old
I know what you crave, I know what you need
I sit on my throne watching as your heart starts to bleed
I feel the pain that's in your eyes
I see your fears as you start to cry
I will deliver the release you so desperately seek
your heart for the taking will be mine to keep
You'll be my sex slave that lays at my feet
never feeling alone no need to weep...
Do not feel guilty my submissive little man
we all have our own Pre-written plan...
Copyright © 2005 Maureen Doucette A/K/A Broom1692 aka Zazzles
All rights Reserved
unlocking and unleashing the beast from within
giving you the right to release your pain
searching no more for your own selfish gain
I entered your life like a thief in the night
seeking and stealing all your thoughts that weren't right Knowing down deep the desires that taunt you the secrets you have how they must haunt you
I know who you are, do you know who I am
I am the one holding your hand
I am the Mistress who took your soul
I am she even as you grow old
I know what you crave, I know what you need
I sit on my throne watching as your heart starts to bleed
I feel the pain that's in your eyes
I see your fears as you start to cry
I will deliver the release you so desperately seek
your heart for the taking will be mine to keep
You'll be my sex slave that lays at my feet
never feeling alone no need to weep...
Do not feel guilty my submissive little man
we all have our own Pre-written plan...
Copyright © 2005 Maureen Doucette A/K/A Broom1692 aka Zazzles
All rights Reserved
Published 8th Jun 2014
| Edited 11th Mar 2023
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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8th Jun 2014 5:41am
8th Jun 2014 6:03am
8th Jun 2014 7:48pm
Nice to meet you Frankee, Yeah I wrote that a long time ago it was not personal it was business.
And by sex slave not sex with me but mine to use with someone else.
Thanks for the read frankee
Broom
And by sex slave not sex with me but mine to use with someone else.
Thanks for the read frankee
Broom
9th Jun 2014 00:54am
Excellent story of power-Scary stuff Broomie-captured energy in Ink!!!
9th Jun 2014 3:57am
Wow you look so different in this pic Gabe ")
Thanks for the read my friend Xo
Hugs
Broomie
Thanks for the read my friend Xo
Hugs
Broomie
9th Jun 2014 5:18pm
What a sexy write Broom, really smooth flow. The bond is unique between them, felt it in the written words.
9th Jun 2014 5:41pm
Hello As, how are you? ")
Thanks for the read my friend !
(((((((As)))))))
Broomie
Thanks for the read my friend !
(((((((As)))))))
Broomie
10th Jun 2014 10:30pm
I found this beautiful piece to be more dark than erotic, Broom! I really enjoyed this ladybug, read it twice! Xo
Pen Love~
Pen Love~
11th Jun 2014 1:06am
Oh hello Rain, nice to see you @@)
Thanks for the read glad you liked this ")
Broomie
Thanks for the read glad you liked this ")
Broomie
The heavy voice is haunting. I love how it establishes an limited omniscience over the man, stripping him, making him vulnerable.
"Do not feel guilty my submissive little man
we all have our own Pre-written plan... "
It appeals to the sense of fate, but it sounds like doom instead of destiny. Yet, it shows the hyper-sexuality in the relationship in calling the man a "sex slave". Though he is trapped, he is trapped by sex and pleasure because the narrator owns him by his desires. This is an honest observation from the enlightened viewpoint of the narrator. She discloses to the man what is going on and what power she has over him, but the man does not care to be in her bondage because he wants her erotic love that much, and so the woman recognizes her position over the man and her knowledge of his thoughts. She becomes something like a goddess to the man or some powerful feminine spirit of sex and love, and she in in charge of him. Yet, she is so smart to know in the very end that everyone is bound by some doom. She does not mentions hers which only serves to add to her mysticism. Nice read :)
"Do not feel guilty my submissive little man
we all have our own Pre-written plan... "
It appeals to the sense of fate, but it sounds like doom instead of destiny. Yet, it shows the hyper-sexuality in the relationship in calling the man a "sex slave". Though he is trapped, he is trapped by sex and pleasure because the narrator owns him by his desires. This is an honest observation from the enlightened viewpoint of the narrator. She discloses to the man what is going on and what power she has over him, but the man does not care to be in her bondage because he wants her erotic love that much, and so the woman recognizes her position over the man and her knowledge of his thoughts. She becomes something like a goddess to the man or some powerful feminine spirit of sex and love, and she in in charge of him. Yet, she is so smart to know in the very end that everyone is bound by some doom. She does not mentions hers which only serves to add to her mysticism. Nice read :)
23rd Sep 2014 7:00am
Hello DM
It was refreshing to see someone actually look at my poetry and talk about it piece by piece!
It's been a minutes since that has happened.
I'm glad you liked it!
Zazzles ")
It was refreshing to see someone actually look at my poetry and talk about it piece by piece!
It's been a minutes since that has happened.
I'm glad you liked it!
Zazzles ")
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
15th Jul 2018 4:23pm
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15th Jul 2018 4:33pm
lol this was my job! I am neither Dominant nor submissive I am both, I am a switch :)
Thanks for the read Danny
Zazzles
Thanks for the read Danny
Zazzles
