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decayed flowers
decayed flowers
I have read and reread
such a beautiful verse
one comes across in a life time
I have liked it and added it to my RL
but for the comments
which high light your poem
I would have remained a dwarf
they raise my height
but momentarily
but raise they do
how a lovely poetic flower
flowery one are you
may the Lord bless you
such beautiful metaphorical words
alas come to very few
and
one am I hope
all DUP by now knew
the wondrous poet
in flowery you...
sobbing ....lonely .......
is it necessary in DUP
to only shower praise
or
also radical errors erase?
tears live in eyes domain
as much as pain
in heart does remain
I couldn't help but ask how
your heart sheds sobbing tears
you may enlighten the dwarf in me
it may brighten
and all can see
me...
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