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decayed flowers


 decayed flowers



I have read and reread
such a beautiful verse
one comes across in a life time

I have  liked it and added it to my RL


but for the comments
which high light your poem
I would have  remained a dwarf  
they raise my height
but momentarily
but raise they do  

how a lovely poetic flower
flowery one are you

may the Lord bless you
such beautiful metaphorical words
alas come to very few  
and
one am I hope
all DUP by now knew
the wondrous poet  
in flowery you...

sobbing ....lonely .......

is it necessary in DUP
to only shower praise
or
also radical errors erase?

tears live in eyes domain
as much as pain
in heart does remain

I couldn't help but ask how
your heart sheds sobbing tears

you may enlighten the dwarf in me
it may brighten
and all can see
me...
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