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Freedom
Hurt is my warden, memories hidden behind hazel eyes.
Dis-Trust is my guard, under lock and key, I rarely attempt to fly.
Sex is who for I’m the Bitch; acts that satisfy but don’t fulfill.
Fear creates my heavy shackles, Lies compose my chains;
Self-Imprisonment realization, as I choke down bitter pills.
But as I carry this sentence out, I begin to believe
Hope can be my pardon, Pain could be my release
Gift of self is my ticket out and Service my reprieve
Freedom is ultimately in… me...loving me.
Dis-Trust is my guard, under lock and key, I rarely attempt to fly.
Sex is who for I’m the Bitch; acts that satisfy but don’t fulfill.
Fear creates my heavy shackles, Lies compose my chains;
Self-Imprisonment realization, as I choke down bitter pills.
But as I carry this sentence out, I begin to believe
Hope can be my pardon, Pain could be my release
Gift of self is my ticket out and Service my reprieve
Freedom is ultimately in… me...loving me.
Published 15th May 2014
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15th May 2014 5:55pm
15th May 2014 5:58pm
Thank you Sir Poet....for the read and comment.. as always you give me a smile..thank you :) with love and respect..xoxo domore
15th May 2014 6:11pm
There is no greater love then loving yourself. For all other things in life are gifts to our emotions, to inspire, to feel deeply.....All things to shape our souls as a person, to build oneself. On rare occasions we are forever blessed with moments of surreal experiences - bad or good - in the end they are still gifts for we are nothing without them.
Stunning write Domore
Stunning write Domore
15th May 2014 10:20pm
Awakened, you express such knowledge and understanding.. spoken with what I surmise is strong belief based on personal experience and observations...thank you for sharing. for reading my work and for commenting....it is much appreciated and provides much food for thought..with deepest respect.. domore
15th May 2014 6:17pm
a poignant self-exposé, beautiful domore. enjoyed the depths of discovery in your words xo
15th May 2014 10:22pm
Thank you lovely miss m ... I am delighted that you enjoyed... this didn't flow exactly as I had wanted.. but the message is delivered none the less... thank you for reading ... with love and respect..xoxo domore
15th May 2014 9:07pm
Ms D, concise, captivating, moving, evoking spiritual, emotional and physical freedom. Exemplary!
Thank you Mr VP.. I don't know what to say to such high compliments.. :) "Thank you" seems inadequate..but please know your thoughts are most appreciated.. with much respect.. xoxo domore
16th May 2014 00:17am
domore, feeling your self exploration. Liking it.
I know the warden and the guard. They call me Master. :)
I know the warden and the guard. They call me Master. :)
16th May 2014 6:19am
Anonymous
16th May 2014 1:05am
A lot of deep thoughts I'm sure many of us face, very nicely written, thanks for letting us in your noodle
16th May 2014 6:21am
:) Thank you dkruie :) deep thought kinda day.. I am honored that this has found a home with you on your RL.. with much respect..domore
Anonymous
16th May 2014 2:44am
Wow! This write had my words stunned. What a deep emotional piece. Honestly I am speechless of how this has made me feel. Sending luv and hugs your way. Xo :)
16th May 2014 6:25am
Lovely Flower.. your words are precious to me.. to leave you speechless (I hope in good way) is saying alot in and of it self... much appreciate the luv and hugs dear friend.. with love and respect..xoxo domore :)
