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Thirst
Out of desert dune with foxy glint, following thirst, too early to keep it down,
rising with the corn fed fields, morning dew smiling, summoning a failing god
on worshipping branches, languid on the rivers dry bed, telling their tall tales,
whispers the breeze, picked up about the rains that once were fortold.
rising with the corn fed fields, morning dew smiling, summoning a failing god
on worshipping branches, languid on the rivers dry bed, telling their tall tales,
whispers the breeze, picked up about the rains that once were fortold.
Published 13th May 2014
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Anonymous
13th May 2014 12:42pm
Wonderful...
"morning dew smiling, summoning a failing god
on worshipping branches, languid on the rivers dry bed, telling their tall tales"
Can see the image rising up from the words
Much enjoyed this flow of words!
"morning dew smiling, summoning a failing god
on worshipping branches, languid on the rivers dry bed, telling their tall tales"
Can see the image rising up from the words
Much enjoyed this flow of words!
13th May 2014 12:46pm
Thankyou Mourganna
its one of my drafts from about 4 years ago
just stumbled upon it
needed a slight tweek before upload but all's good with it now xD
its one of my drafts from about 4 years ago
just stumbled upon it
needed a slight tweek before upload but all's good with it now xD
13th May 2014 12:48pm
13th May 2014 12:57pm
13th May 2014 5:45pm
Wow! "Summoning a failing God" - that's powerful
Love that you brought it back for us to read.
Love that you brought it back for us to read.
13th May 2014 5:59pm
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