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I'm Hoping
I'm fighting to keep my eyes shut, sleep would be nice
Hoping tomorrow isn't too late, to see your face
I'm wondering if you'll hear me, whisper my goodbyes
Hoping you're pain is gone, for the very last time
Hoping tomorrow isn't too late, to see your face
I'm wondering if you'll hear me, whisper my goodbyes
Hoping you're pain is gone, for the very last time
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Re: I'm Hoping
13th May 2014 6:45am
Tommie, this is truly a poignant, soul-felt peace. She'll hear you, I know she will. Thank you so much for sharing this piece of your heart.
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13th May 2014 10:01pm
My heart is breaking. I spent the day with her in ICU. But I was very surprised to find her awake. Although she had several tubes in her she new I was there, she looked at me, I told her I loved her, she mouthed it back and we both cried. Her tubes were removed at 11:30am and I said my last goodbye to her at 1pm. She wasn't feeling any pain. Now I'm just waiting for that very difficult phone call to say she's gone. Thank you for reading this GW I appreciate it. ;)
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14th May 2014 4:02am
What a deeply beautiful experience. Out of the many "I love you's" said these are the most sincere and eternal in nature, You have seen her off on a glorious journey absent of pain.
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15th May 2014 5:54pm
My dear friend passed away yesterday morning. I'm very thankful I got to say goodbye to her. It's going to be tough but I'll never forget her.
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13th May 2014 10:02pm
It makes me very happy you can feel this Poet. As sad as it is...Thank you. ;)
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13th May 2014 10:47pm
I feel your pain. Things like this are never easy. Pray and hope for the best. God Bless.
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13th May 2014 11:34pm
Very true, things are never easy. I truly appreciate your comment xmar82. Thank you ;)
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Anonymous
15th May 2014 5:45pm
The last line gives a surge of beauty in an otherwise heart-wrenching piece. Enjoyed and well-done friend.
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17th May 2014 5:18am
A very deep write a soul tht pleas for the spirit. This is beautiful Tommie Lynn
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17th May 2014 2:20pm
My last day with her was heartbreaking. But she knew I was there. And we cried together.Thank you BlackSoul. :)