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Feeding Time
Tracing veins with a dull blade.
Found it in my own grave-
Rusted and bent out of shape.
Sufficient for a murder and rape;
In that order.
Call the coroner.
It engraves itself with
Shattered souls-
Enough pieces to make a whole
Being,
But this being won't be living.
Walking entity
Stalking life.
Preoccupied by hate and lies.
Ready to feed
Off of innocent cries.
Found it in my own grave-
Rusted and bent out of shape.
Sufficient for a murder and rape;
In that order.
Call the coroner.
It engraves itself with
Shattered souls-
Enough pieces to make a whole
Being,
But this being won't be living.
Walking entity
Stalking life.
Preoccupied by hate and lies.
Ready to feed
Off of innocent cries.
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Re: Feeding Time
12th May 2014 1:02am
This is a very powerful poem that gets down into your soul.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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13th May 2014 10:59am
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Re: Feeding Time
16th May 2014 7:34pm
I could sit and watch you write all day!!!
Love the ink Madi!!
Awesome read!!
Sir Lancelott
Love the ink Madi!!
Awesome read!!
Sir Lancelott
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21st May 2014 3:07am
You'd get anxious with all the pieces of six line starts I write...and then crumple.
Thanks for reading :)
Thanks for reading :)
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20th May 2014 11:46pm
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21st May 2014 3:09am
Give it about ten minutes- some of the talent on here blows me away. Sheer brilliance.
Thanks for reading! Welcome to the DU.
Thanks for reading! Welcome to the DU.
Re: Feeding Time
2nd Jul 2014 8:17am
You really have a way of connecting with people in your words and this a really strong poem great work
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2014 4:12am
very haunting piece, great write.
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2014 1:22am
I am really impressed by this, you write very beautiful and very dark, amazing write.
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re: Re: Feeding Time
25th Jul 2014 1:47am
Sometimes I feel like a blade, sometimes I feel like a daisy.
Thanks for reading, I'm very glad you enjoyed.
Read on :)
Thanks for reading, I'm very glad you enjoyed.
Read on :)
Re: Feeding Time
25th Jul 2014 6:43pm