Faded

robbed in bright daylight,
yes, that captures the
shock of a sudden loss
really well...to be left cold
in the sun...

Robbed of everything that's precious to you leaves you dead cold.
As to the sun, she's set.
And I'm upset ...

the sun always rises...

I hope it shines on you soon x

Thanks, dear Paul. It will. Tomorrow morning. Hey, I just try to write poems ... but they feed on feelings, yes. xx

Yeah. Faded fervor. I've heard about that. Trying to keep it at arms length, miss.

Struggling hard, hawk:-).

When fire, turns to ice, flames turn into water.
Another fine write! Chi.

Fay, you said it perfectly and better than I could do. Perhaps you should turn your own words into a poem!
Thank you for the warm comment!

Loved the last line :*

I love the next to last line most, imagining love as a blanket :-). Thanks a lot, Brinda!

Oh my sweetness, NOT a haiku, nor any particular form?!
But it is a powerful n just absolutely brilliant piece of emotional ink! N though it's sad, I bow to you my dear

My dearest Poe, thank you always for giving me emotional support and lending me both of your shoulders (muah). No, no particular form this time. Had to ink it as unpolished as it emanated from my poetic mind :-). Thank you for the RL entry, I'm so honored! Well, that was kind of formal since we always try to answer eloquently. Deep from my heart I'd say: Love you and your mental hugs!

the pain eventually fades...
the joy too, perhaps...
even the memories fade...
Is there no constancy?

Yes, there is! As everything is in motion the only constancy we can count on is inconstancy. Like the seasons our lives will be constantly renovated. How releaving ... Love your insightful comments!

Left me feeling sad and barren

Dont like anyone fucking with you this way ...

So grateful for your reassuring and soothing words, Speak! Neither do I like being fucked with this way! But I saw it coming AND it was necessary for perhaps) not so obvious reasons. Still sad, yes.

Painful truth in each syllable ... this ink of yours is rattling in my chambers

Oh! Rattling in your chambers ... a new and interesting idiom for me to learn :-)! Thank you, dear LSP, I'm thankful for your welcome emotional support!

heartbreak poetry, Chi, but so well crafted...

You know, John, sometimes the crafting of poems is the only thing that saves your from shattering. Thank you so much, dear ...

Touching and painful. Beautiful write. <3

Glad you like it! Pain has led to this poem and beautiful words as yours will help me out. Thank you <3.

Lost passion...tearful :(

Exactly. Not even love, just passion, but still ... Hey! Smile for me, dear Hash!

:) 4 u

Thaaaaaaaaaaaanks :-)!!!