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I wonder sometimes..
I wonder if we all in our various way of things; have an odd and different behavior,
an ingrained pattern to ourselves. A taboo desire, a secret stash;
a skewed view mind, something side-ways in our brains.
Normalcy is, as normal does, based on the world’s opinion at that point in history.
Deceivers and yet full of Faith, looking for clues to solve “The Mystery”
Somewhere between a manic and depressive state we roam,
Forever searching and yet running away from “home”.
Multiple personalities we don’t allow any, one person to see.
We even hide from ourselves. I wonder if we all are a little bit crazy.
an ingrained pattern to ourselves. A taboo desire, a secret stash;
a skewed view mind, something side-ways in our brains.
Normalcy is, as normal does, based on the world’s opinion at that point in history.
Deceivers and yet full of Faith, looking for clues to solve “The Mystery”
Somewhere between a manic and depressive state we roam,
Forever searching and yet running away from “home”.
Multiple personalities we don’t allow any, one person to see.
We even hide from ourselves. I wonder if we all are a little bit crazy.
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Re: I wonder sometimes..
6th May 2014 5:42pm
Interesting take on the world.
Self absorbed planet of zombies we are ....
heavy thinker piece
xx
Self absorbed planet of zombies we are ....
heavy thinker piece
xx
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re: Re: I wonder sometimes..
6th May 2014 7:15pm
Thank you Sir Poet.. deep thoughts by domore.. one of those kinda days.. :) with love and respect..xoxo domore
Re: I wonder sometimes..
6th May 2014 5:54pm
great introspection the ending made me laugh because I know I'm a little crazy :) with love Crim
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re: Re: I wonder sometimes..
6th May 2014 7:17pm
Thank you beautiful Crim.. I'm glad to have brought you a laugh..truthfully..I know I'm a little side-ways myself :) with love and respect..xoxo domore
Re: I wonder sometimes..
6th May 2014 9:50pm
How can we ever be whole if were are not a little of everything, to be truly align we must be misaligned. Impactful write and a true pleasure to read.
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re: Re: I wonder sometimes..
6th May 2014 10:31pm
Awakened.. my gratitude renews itself with each comment you grace my work with.. i am so very pleased to have offered a bit of pleasure in this read for you.. with deepest respect..domore
Re: I wonder sometimes..
7th May 2014 00:07am
Material of substance to run through the assembly line of our mental factory. Well done!
'Normal' appears only as a cycle on the washer/dishwasher.
No shame in my confession. I am abnormal and PC. *Properly Crazy*
'Normal' appears only as a cycle on the washer/dishwasher.
No shame in my confession. I am abnormal and PC. *Properly Crazy*
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re: Re: I wonder sometimes..
7th May 2014 2:30pm
Thank you VP.. I adore your comment :) PC "Properly Crazy" had me smiling :) Thank you for the read and your words... with love and respect..xoxo domore
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Anonymous
7th May 2014 00:39am
Excellent write. I wrote my comment a few times figuring out the right thing to say. Guess this write is so good it has stunned my words. LOL!!! Enjoyed! Xo :)
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re: Re: I wonder sometimes..
7th May 2014 2:32pm
Lovely flower... thank you for the read and comment :) you expressing that this write was good enough to "stun" your words...is a precious gift :) with love and respect my friend.. xoxo domore :)
Re: I wonder sometimes..
I think my normal has become to ashamed to associate with me anymore but then again, so has my wife.
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re: Re: I wonder sometimes..
7th May 2014 2:47pm
Mister R.T.... Thank you for the read and comment.. absolutely wonderful. I enjoy your sense of humor.. you had me LOL (literally).. with respect..domore
ps. I am honored that this has found a home within your RL..I sincerely appreciate.. :)
ps. I am honored that this has found a home within your RL..I sincerely appreciate.. :)
Re: I wonder sometimes..
7th May 2014 6:53am
giggling at R.T's comment. totally priceless.
well i'm mad has a hatter o.O no hiding that lol
a brilliant write, lovely domore xo food for thought.
well i'm mad has a hatter o.O no hiding that lol
a brilliant write, lovely domore xo food for thought.
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re: Re: I wonder sometimes..
7th May 2014 2:49pm
beautiful miss m... I agree with you on R.T's comment :) as far as you being mad as a hatter.. I'd sit down to tea with you anytime:) thank you for the read and the wonderful comment..with love and respect to you..xoxo domore
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8th May 2014 7:54am
re: Re: I wonder sometimes..
8th May 2014 12:51pm
Indeed Mr Feddeler, you are correct :) thank you for the visit.. read and comment..with respect..domore
Re: I wonder sometimes..
Anonymous
8th May 2014 9:39pm
I think we are all crazy, some of us embrace it more the others... but maybe they are the enlightened ones.
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re: Re: I wonder sometimes..
9th May 2014 00:54am
Thank you dkruie :) for the read and comment..I believe you may be correct.. your remark reminds me of a quote..
"Knowing others is wisdom, knowing yourself is Enlightenment." -- Lao Tzu
with respect..domore
"Knowing others is wisdom, knowing yourself is Enlightenment." -- Lao Tzu
with respect..domore
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re: Re: I wonder sometimes..
28th Jun 2014 5:29pm
Thank you Mr Jack-Tex...your comment leaves me delighted. That this ink indicates a mark of intellect is a heady comment to make, and I am grateful to you for it making it. with respect..domore