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My New Word?
Let me dicktify you baby nightly
make you emit that sexy sound
that comes natural in erotic paradise
me enjoying your sacred mound
Let me add nutrients to your bodily garden
even if the traditional flower doesn't grow
we can enjoy the beauty that comes in the effort
and make it quick or ever so slow
Body responding to body in motion
flavor sweet on both of our lips
glow of intercourse oh how splendid
heat that can only be produced in the hips
make you emit that sexy sound
that comes natural in erotic paradise
me enjoying your sacred mound
Let me add nutrients to your bodily garden
even if the traditional flower doesn't grow
we can enjoy the beauty that comes in the effort
and make it quick or ever so slow
Body responding to body in motion
flavor sweet on both of our lips
glow of intercourse oh how splendid
heat that can only be produced in the hips
Published 3rd May 2014
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3rd May 2014 2:51pm
Yess, So intensely inticing.. Like a melody ive been longing for, Lovely penmanship mr. Jazz.. <3 Monroe_
3rd May 2014 3:55pm
3rd May 2014 2:57pm
3rd May 2014 3:57pm
maybe the lightness is reflective of the cold medicine in me?
Thanks for loaning me your eyes.
Thanks for loaning me your eyes.
3rd May 2014 4:55pm
I am very curious as to what you mean here by "even if the traditional flower doesn't grow".....
Overall a sweet and subtly erotic little gem of a poem that I enjoyed reading very much...... :) ♡♡♡
Overall a sweet and subtly erotic little gem of a poem that I enjoyed reading very much...... :) ♡♡♡
3rd May 2014 11:19pm
4th May 2014 6:54am
Now that I know what you meant by it, I like the poem even better....... very sweet!!! :) ♡♡♡ P.S. I would put this on my reading list, if I had any room left..... :)
that is very kind of you to let me know it was that appealing! I noticed you have 4 poems of mine already on your list. That might be 3 too many :)
6th May 2014 7:01am
I don't really like deleting things from my reading list but in this case I might have to although I don't necessarily think I would be deleting something that you have written...
I have to go throughh my list when I have some spare time..... :) ♡♡♡
I have to go throughh my list when I have some spare time..... :) ♡♡♡
6th May 2014 11:29am
Well this may be just my opinion but I don't value the erotic poems that highly. If I have to defend something I created I much prefer the other genres, even though erotic is what I have done the most of.
3rd May 2014 8:37pm
3rd May 2014 11:22pm
Tom Petty and the Heartbreakers said it best, "even the losers get lucky sometime". Thanks for your generous consideration!
4th May 2014 3:09pm
4th May 2014 4:52am
lol... I laughed at your new word when first reading it, but it gave your ink a little sexy swag upon further reading! Xo
...me like ~dicktify
...me like ~dicktify
4th May 2014 5:33am
19th May 2014 10:56am
19th May 2014 3:56pm
thanks---I figure if former sports starts can come up with new words, so can I. (I won't mention the former governor of Alaska or a former vice-president, who changed the spelling of potato)
I appreciate the read!
I appreciate the read!
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22nd May 2014 6:56pm
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