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Frozen
Whitened winds howling through the night
Sharpened icicles gleaming on the eaves
Bulbous clouds drowning out the light
Sparkling frost glistening on the leaves
Sharpened icicles gleaming on the eaves
Crunching snow caking on the ground
Sparkling frost glistening on the leaves
Fluttering snowflakes cloaking out all sound
Crunching snow caking on the ground
Thickened sleet shrouding o'er the streets
Fluttering snowflakes cloaking out all sound
Silent snow crackling on the trees
Thickened sleet shrouding o'er the streets
Bulbous clouds drowning out the light
Silent snow crackling on the trees
Whitened winds howling through the night
Sharpened icicles gleaming on the eaves
Bulbous clouds drowning out the light
Sparkling frost glistening on the leaves
Sharpened icicles gleaming on the eaves
Crunching snow caking on the ground
Sparkling frost glistening on the leaves
Fluttering snowflakes cloaking out all sound
Crunching snow caking on the ground
Thickened sleet shrouding o'er the streets
Fluttering snowflakes cloaking out all sound
Silent snow crackling on the trees
Thickened sleet shrouding o'er the streets
Bulbous clouds drowning out the light
Silent snow crackling on the trees
Whitened winds howling through the night
Published 29th Apr 2014
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29th Apr 2014 10:02pm
29th Apr 2014 10:39pm
I think your technique is awesome...
Feels kinda back and forth to the next paragraph
I dont make sense but I enjoy your stuff;)
Feels kinda back and forth to the next paragraph
I dont make sense but I enjoy your stuff;)
30th Apr 2014 00:39am
30th Apr 2014 9:51am
This is Great, I have got to give it a Try!
Is this a form of Sestina?
Thank You once more
Is this a form of Sestina?
Thank You once more
30th Apr 2014 12:24pm
It's actually a form of Malaysian poetry known as a pantoum.
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by!
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by!
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