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YEARS ON ME
Having a few years on me, I still want the delicious treat of sexy you. Shedding that cute summer dress, your pretty hair, stunning figure and sparkling eyes amazed me. We had a beautiful lunch naked in my backyard. After a few flirts back and forth, putting the food away, we got comfortable on the blanket making out like maniacs with a passion. Gorgeous breasts with rock hard nipples felt awesome against my chest. Feeling the stiffness between us, with a moan you go down too investigate. The sweet way you took me in, you must have had a fudge-cicle on the way over. Bobbing like you created the craft, every up stroke had incredible suction. After some time of killer brain, I gave your seeping honeypot the tonguing of a lifetime. Lashing, dipping and slurping I forgot it's been a minute for sexy you and your orgasms had a hair trigger. You came like a motherfucker, mind screaming. I kept swirling your clit as you came, whimpering insanely, shuddering heavily then pushing me off. Getting back on the blanket, because your sexy ass grew feet, laid back spreading thick pretty thighs wide. You flash a sweet grin as the main event was near. Pipe still kind of numb from intoxicating brain, maintaining steel. Once the mushroom and a couple inches crossed your threshold, you cried out gripping breasts, closing eyes. Your ride a bike feelings kicked in, putting heals on my ass cheeks forcing the other seven deep inside, moaning like crazy. Long even strokes drenched your honeypot, tossing toned fleshy ass off the blanket. In a good hour we shift into overdrive, battering that honeypot "til all of her body parts rippled from cumming. We adored the connection we made, you having a few years on me.
Sir Lancelott
Sir Lancelott
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Re: YEARS ON ME
28th Apr 2014 7:59pm
" Getting back on the blanket, because your sexy ass grew feet," Loved this line!! Made me smile...all those good years and all! :)
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1st May 2014 1:56am
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28th Apr 2014 8:49pm
My goodness! You hit something with this one. Such a hot piece of work.
Awesome one, Sir!
Looking forward to more :)
Awesome one, Sir!
Looking forward to more :)
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1st May 2014 1:58am
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28th Apr 2014 9:03pm
LANCE!!! Where have you been? You know how many times I've looked on here & been disappointed with my updates? Haha not that i don't love my other poets but still!
Lovin' this, sounds like a nice warm summer day at play!
'The sweet way you took me in, you must have had a fudge-cicle on the way over.' i like the slight humor too.
Diggin' it!
Lovin' this, sounds like a nice warm summer day at play!
'The sweet way you took me in, you must have had a fudge-cicle on the way over.' i like the slight humor too.
Diggin' it!
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1st May 2014 2:00am
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28th Apr 2014 9:11pm
Lancelott, my knight....
Although thy lady hath a few years on thee, those years were so surely ones of sensual experience--indeed!! Her skills in the performance of sexual pleasure were certainly equal to thine own...if not, i dare say, a bit beyond!!
AHHhhh--once again thy quill hath created such a vivid tale of passionate release on parchment!!
Thy words hath set the depths of thy sorceress aflame with lust!
Well scribed, Sir Knight!!
Although thy lady hath a few years on thee, those years were so surely ones of sensual experience--indeed!! Her skills in the performance of sexual pleasure were certainly equal to thine own...if not, i dare say, a bit beyond!!
AHHhhh--once again thy quill hath created such a vivid tale of passionate release on parchment!!
Thy words hath set the depths of thy sorceress aflame with lust!
Well scribed, Sir Knight!!
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1st May 2014 2:04am
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28th Apr 2014 9:41pm
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1st May 2014 2:06am
Re: YEARS ON ME
29th Apr 2014 2:19am
"Lashing, dipping, slurping"...... oh my --- makes one want to have a naked picnic with you in your backyard.
Your language here is stronger than I am normally used to from you, but that doesn't take away from the fact that the master of erotica has once again blessed us with a very hot and erotic poem........ I am picturing this scenario in my mind and am enjoying the aftermath of your words........... superhot!!! :) ;) <3
Your language here is stronger than I am normally used to from you, but that doesn't take away from the fact that the master of erotica has once again blessed us with a very hot and erotic poem........ I am picturing this scenario in my mind and am enjoying the aftermath of your words........... superhot!!! :) ;) <3
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1st May 2014 2:07am
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29th Apr 2014 3:04am
My my this was nice and naughty..really like the riding a bike line..great allusion..enjoyed :)
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1st May 2014 2:09am
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29th Apr 2014 4:09am
Nice sir...very very nice!!! Naughtiness to it's best illusionary levels...bravo!
:)
:)
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1st May 2014 2:12am
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29th Apr 2014 4:26am
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1st May 2014 2:13am
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29th Apr 2014 4:58am
You are truly the king of kink!
I have to tell you Lance you have a heart as big as a football stadium a true giver you are.
And a sex-drive bigger than a whales tale cutie! I thought you wrote this with such fire too.
Well done!
Zazzles
I have to tell you Lance you have a heart as big as a football stadium a true giver you are.
And a sex-drive bigger than a whales tale cutie! I thought you wrote this with such fire too.
Well done!
Zazzles
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Anonymous
29th Apr 2014 5:49am
banana popsicle and cherry ice cream... just the way to beat the heat...
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1st May 2014 2:18am
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Anonymous
29th Apr 2014 3:32pm
What a beautiful write. How wonderful it is to still be content after being together for a long time. Great tribute to your Lady. Enjoyed! :)
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1st May 2014 2:20am
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30th Apr 2014 1:45pm
Re: YEARS ON ME
1st May 2014 3:50am
"you must have had a fudge-cicle on the way over"
^^^^that line made me laugh, don't know why.
Years and experience makes for great sex...Xo
^^^^that line made me laugh, don't know why.
Years and experience makes for great sex...Xo
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2nd May 2014 1:01am
Thanxxx RAIN I adore it when you show up!!!
Mucho Love, Respect and Thanxxx!!!
Mucho Love, Respect and Thanxxx!!!
Re: YEARS ON ME
On top of the intriguing adventure, you expanded my the meaning of at least two phrases.
Thanks teach!
Thanks teach!
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5th May 2014 7:28pm
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3rd May 2014 7:12pm
battering that honeypot
"til all of her body parts rippled from cumming....
Sir...Sir ...Sir
How I wish you had been my trainer
gals would have widened their thing
thinking me as Sir's phantom
inside theirs
Sir what else can I say...
I wish to learn from you
how women to lay
and reach a fair level
of orgasmic way
help me sir how to my solid one
in side them display
as they lay...
"til all of her body parts rippled from cumming....
Sir...Sir ...Sir
How I wish you had been my trainer
gals would have widened their thing
thinking me as Sir's phantom
inside theirs
Sir what else can I say...
I wish to learn from you
how women to lay
and reach a fair level
of orgasmic way
help me sir how to my solid one
in side them display
as they lay...
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5th May 2014 7:26pm