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The Love of the Rain--A Palindrome
Rain is beauty
Incarnate,
This love of full skies
Straining from shivering restraints,
The joy of gently forming droplets;
The perfection of sweetness.
Sweetness of perfection, the
Droplets forming gently of joy, the
Restraints shivering from straining
Skies full of love...this
Incarnate
Beauty is rain.
Incarnate,
This love of full skies
Straining from shivering restraints,
The joy of gently forming droplets;
The perfection of sweetness.
Sweetness of perfection, the
Droplets forming gently of joy, the
Restraints shivering from straining
Skies full of love...this
Incarnate
Beauty is rain.
Published 25th Apr 2014
| Edited 29th Apr 2014
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26th Apr 2014 3:20am
Wow I couldn't agree more I adore the rain in every way! A wonderful and lovely piece you have here! Crisp and to the point!
Thank you for coming to my corner fist so that I had the chance have discover your talent and I did!
Zazzle
Thank you for coming to my corner fist so that I had the chance have discover your talent and I did!
Zazzle
26th Apr 2014 3:22am
the rain cleanses the Earth and the soul.. I love dancing in the rain.. a beauty of a write :) with love Crim
26th Apr 2014 10:39am
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26th Apr 2014 12:43pm
Rain is always special, rainbows even more....
beautiful poem!
beautiful poem!
26th Apr 2014 1:25pm
Wow, beautiful palindrome, Atarliss! I love it. And the subject is also very nice, rain is special in poetry/
28th Apr 2014 9:25pm
28th Apr 2014 9:26pm
