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The Morning Star
Fire come rain down on me
let me feel your pain and free me
take me to hell bound and chained
set my soul free with your Sadistic ways
death come stare me in the face
let's converse I'm ready to be done with this curse
masochistic children coming close to the fire
we aren't burned here feeling warm and secure
licking the flames of desire
that is hell's pyre
you're the first born
the Morning Star
my eyes beheld your greatness
please give me the pain that is earned and deserved
toss me in the abyss
chained my being finds release
dark soul keeping tight
to what lies within
"crimsin come reign with Me
utter darkness will give you comfort"
"taking you into Me now
fucking you psychologically"
let me feel your pain and free me
take me to hell bound and chained
set my soul free with your Sadistic ways
death come stare me in the face
let's converse I'm ready to be done with this curse
masochistic children coming close to the fire
we aren't burned here feeling warm and secure
licking the flames of desire
that is hell's pyre
you're the first born
the Morning Star
my eyes beheld your greatness
please give me the pain that is earned and deserved
toss me in the abyss
chained my being finds release
dark soul keeping tight
to what lies within
"crimsin come reign with Me
utter darkness will give you comfort"
"taking you into Me now
fucking you psychologically"
Published 25th Apr 2014
| Edited 26th Apr 2014
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Anonymous
25th Apr 2014 4:58am
This has me wondering if you meant this as a dark write with a sexy edge or a sexy write with a dark edge. Either way.....take a bow this is brilliant! Xo :)
25th Apr 2014 5:49am
25th Apr 2014 5:12am
"chained my being finds release" White hot in a cloud of darkness. :) Magnificent ink, lovely Brenda!
25th Apr 2014 5:50am
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25th Apr 2014 4:45pm
25th Apr 2014 6:49am
Darkly erotic ink lovely Brenda :) "take me to hell bound and chained
set my soul free with your sadistic ways " great imagery from the truly talented Crim.. with love and respect.. xoxo domore
set my soul free with your sadistic ways " great imagery from the truly talented Crim.. with love and respect.. xoxo domore
25th Apr 2014 4:46pm
25th Apr 2014 9:01am
"masochistic children coming close to the fire
we aren't burned here feeling warm and secure"
it's like bathing in the river styx. love your flow beautiful Brenda xo
we aren't burned here feeling warm and secure"
it's like bathing in the river styx. love your flow beautiful Brenda xo
25th Apr 2014 4:46pm
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25th Apr 2014 2:08pm
Evoking evil, and with such a dark passion for Satan. Your wickedness rules. :)
25th Apr 2014 4:48pm
Anonymous
25th Apr 2014 4:58pm
In many ways this poem reminds me of a reflection of you. . .beautiful write, Crim. Take a bow. . .with respect, Devlin.
25th Apr 2014 5:20pm
thank you graciously for seeing my reflection in this write and for the great comment :) with respect Crim
25th Apr 2014 5:40pm
26th Apr 2014 1:39am
25th Apr 2014 5:42pm
Dark and lovely , brought to mind oscar wilde "When that high spirit, that morning star of evil, fell from heaven, it was as a rebel that he fell"
inspiring as always <3
inspiring as always <3
26th Apr 2014 1:40am
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26th Apr 2014 6:05pm
I don't know what to say!
This was literary amazement.
You have an outstanding, poetic
way and heart when you write.
I enjoyed this wholeheartedly.
And, the picture was a reinforcing
addition.
Great write... Pan
This was literary amazement.
You have an outstanding, poetic
way and heart when you write.
I enjoyed this wholeheartedly.
And, the picture was a reinforcing
addition.
Great write... Pan
26th Apr 2014 6:29pm
