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Wildflower
let me be your wildflower
I'll saturate your heart with the loveliest green
and give your manhood a bright purple sheen
I'll give you my luscious magenta power
and indulge you in many a cream-colored shower
I'll warm your soul with the sunniest yellow
then top it all off with shimmering gold
our love is like a field of wildflowers
such beauty to behold
I'll saturate your heart with the loveliest green
and give your manhood a bright purple sheen
I'll give you my luscious magenta power
and indulge you in many a cream-colored shower
I'll warm your soul with the sunniest yellow
then top it all off with shimmering gold
our love is like a field of wildflowers
such beauty to behold
Published 23rd Apr 2014
| Edited 13th Aug 2014
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Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Apr 2014 3:22am
23rd Apr 2014 1:19am
Oh YES!!! You know I luv this!! LOL!!! I wish I was a guy and you wrote this for me. Luv this! RL for me. Xo :)
24th Apr 2014 10:51pm
Yes I figured you might have special appreciation for this little poem being that you work with flowers and all......
Thanks sweet friend for loving my poem and commenting on it.... :) ♡♡♡
Thanks sweet friend for loving my poem and commenting on it.... :) ♡♡♡
24th Apr 2014 10:42pm
He and his beautiful manhood are like royalty to me -- that is how much I love him.... ;) ♡♡♡
23rd Apr 2014 4:19am
24th Apr 2014 10:48pm
Writing poetry that you can see perfectly in your mind --
what else can I ask for dear Mr. M..... ;) ♡♡♡
what else can I ask for dear Mr. M..... ;) ♡♡♡
24th Apr 2014 10:48pm
Writing poetry that you can see perfectly in your mind --
what else can I ask for dear Mr. M..... ;) ♡♡♡
what else can I ask for dear Mr. M..... ;) ♡♡♡
I do love all things purple
or plum colored
-- the tip of his manhood especially...... ;) ♡♡♡
or plum colored
-- the tip of his manhood especially...... ;) ♡♡♡
30th Apr 2014 6:52am
You r as always a bit mysterious to me in your comment as well as in your poetry....
This poem was written for someone who I consider to be my soulmate and I am very glad that you enjoyed my little poem so much..... :) ♡♡♡
This poem was written for someone who I consider to be my soulmate and I am very glad that you enjoyed my little poem so much..... :) ♡♡♡
Anonymous
25th Apr 2014 9:17pm
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30th Apr 2014 6:54am
Thank you for your sweet comment -- it makes me happy that you caught the subtle eroticism of this poem and thought of it as sexy..... ;) ♡♡♡
2nd May 2014 3:16pm
The slight variations in rhyme scheme go well with the title! Taken as individual lines this is good; when one looks at the whole it is grand. Such a delight for the eyes.
3rd May 2014 5:25am
Coming from such a talented exquisite poet such as yourself, your praise means the world to me and I am happy I could capture your attention with this little poem of mine..... :) ♡♡♡
4th May 2014 2:31am
4th May 2014 6:39am
Well you showering me with your lovely comment is a step towards that in a way...... ;) ♡♡♡
It makes me very happy to have inspired such a strong feeling of wanting to "shower a flower" with love in someone and so thank you for your sweet comment..... :)
It makes me very happy to have inspired such a strong feeling of wanting to "shower a flower" with love in someone and so thank you for your sweet comment..... :)
25th Jun 2014 4:21am
29th Jun 2014 6:50am
Thank you very much for your beautiful comment -- I quite like how this poem turned out -- ♡♡♡ :)
1st Jul 2014 7:39am
This is sexy & dreamy & i feel warm winds against my pores & radiant sun...oh what have you begun? Haha im sitting in front of my pen & I'm urged to write yet again! Its all the while endearing knowing it's for a soulmate, in a simple term just great;D!
P.S. The rhyming was completely unintentional, excuse my poetic ways.
P.S. The rhyming was completely unintentional, excuse my poetic ways.
1st Jul 2014 11:34pm
Love when I get comments like yours -- it makes my poetic journey all worth it -- so happy you liked my little poem so much......♡♡♡
13th Aug 2014 7:21am
I have no idea how I missed this naturally sexy write before now. I musta been sleeping. But I am wide, wide, wide awake now... such wonderful imagery! JJ
13th Aug 2014 7:38am
Glad your response to my poem was that of being wide awake ;) I consider that to be a very good thing ;) Thank you for your praise :) ♡♡♡
13th Oct 2015 10:07pm
Hi Scarlet, Your pen produces the most amazing writing, and is also complimented by the use of a very influential ink. I love your seductive tone and the way it pulls the imagination in every possible direction. Please continue to fill your ink pot from your most resourceful supplier..Imagination Inc xx
