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Bleeding Ink
Eviscerated
with quick precision
ink that cuts
left me here
bleeding on the page
once a comrade
now I see an adversary
who has nothing but disdain
for my sort of love
with quick precision
ink that cuts
left me here
bleeding on the page
once a comrade
now I see an adversary
who has nothing but disdain
for my sort of love
Published 19th Apr 2014
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19th Apr 2014 6:22pm
we all love differently yet the same my beautiful strong friend.. hope the subject realizes this :)
beautiful heartfelt write.. xoxo domore
beautiful heartfelt write.. xoxo domore
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19th Apr 2014 7:42pm
Lovely Lady, this is quick, concise, and very fitting for the intended. Hope it hits its 'mark.'
XO
XO
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19th Apr 2014 8:34pm
*Lowers eyes to see, deep slicing's of cerise ink*. Always an air of intrigue :)
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19th Apr 2014 9:10pm
yes it's a good hurt thank you lovely Rain for reading between the lines :) with love Crim
Anonymous
- Edited 20th Apr 2014 3:20am
20th Apr 2014 3:19am
Now THAT is a beautiful poem. Wow. How I would have loved to have penned that poem! Damn, Crim, that is deeper than deep! With Respect, Devlin
20th Apr 2014 3:56pm
thank you kindly lovely one for the gracious comment and RL add :) with respect Crim
Anonymous
20th Apr 2014 5:36am
Sweet Crim......this hurts me. Please don't sweat over one.....the rest of us luv you. Xo :)
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- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
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20th Apr 2014 2:06pm
Another dark spill becuz of someone ironing on you?
Damn, if ever they really were caring they sure turn quickly
u must know the people I'm surrounded by in my life! lol
sorry, had a lil self deprecating moment there...
Damn, if ever they really were caring they sure turn quickly
u must know the people I'm surrounded by in my life! lol
sorry, had a lil self deprecating moment there...
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21st Apr 2014 6:25pm
There She is-Sharp tongue and barbed ink-Excellence as always Dear Crim!!!
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4th May 2016 00:48am
I tried to have sex with a paper-mache doll once...got paper cuts all over my junk...stung like a mother...lolol...hope that made you smile :)
4th May 2016 3:02am
