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"For they know not what they slay..."
It's analphabetic, how pathetic
the rhetoric of ignorance
run rampant is...unfeeling
For them who get it,
'prophetic the edit'
of heart, from soul
as it will set it's course
into an emotional upheaval
That will send
the proprietor of self hatred's evil
invariably seeking insufferably
until it's eventual retrieval...
ultimately pleading for it's healing...
the rhetoric of ignorance
run rampant is...unfeeling
For them who get it,
'prophetic the edit'
of heart, from soul
as it will set it's course
into an emotional upheaval
That will send
the proprietor of self hatred's evil
invariably seeking insufferably
until it's eventual retrieval...
ultimately pleading for it's healing...
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Re: "For they know not what they slay..."
17th Apr 2014 10:14pm
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18th Apr 2014 12:22pm
Thank you Crim, somehow I get that pen started n have the hardest time stopping lol... Truly grateful for your continued support :)
Re: "For they know not what they slay..."
18th Apr 2014 4:02am
"It's analphabetic, how pathetic
the rhetoric of ignorance
run rampant is...unfeeling"<--that right thurrr, was dope! :) Keep flexing that pen Poe! Loved! Xo
the rhetoric of ignorance
run rampant is...unfeeling"<--that right thurrr, was dope! :) Keep flexing that pen Poe! Loved! Xo
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re: Re: "For they know not what they slay..."
18th Apr 2014 12:24pm
Aaaaawwww well I'll tell you a secret
When I inked that part? I nearly went into
'Worderer Mode' n I didn't wanna channel
him at this point, so I fought the urge to go
inksane after that lol... Mucho appreciato
My dear Rain! :)
When I inked that part? I nearly went into
'Worderer Mode' n I didn't wanna channel
him at this point, so I fought the urge to go
inksane after that lol... Mucho appreciato
My dear Rain! :)
Re: "For they know not what they slay..."
Anonymous
18th Apr 2014 6:21am
Your talent never ends to shine. Enjoyed! :)
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re: Re: "For they know not what they slay..."
18th Apr 2014 12:43pm
Aaaaawwww well all I can say to that is I hope you always feel that way! :) thank u sweetheart :)
Re: "For they know not what they slay..."
18th Apr 2014 1:33pm
Poe i've had to read this a few times to absorb everything and still, i'm floating and lost amid thoughts.
powerful ink as always
powerful ink as always
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re: Re: "For they know not what they slay..."
18th Apr 2014 1:37pm
Aaaawwww baby that is such a compliment!
Feel free though to 'float' in thoughts of me always lol
Gracias Mami, mi amour... :)
Feel free though to 'float' in thoughts of me always lol
Gracias Mami, mi amour... :)
Re: "For they know not what they slay..."
19th Apr 2014 3:21pm
"the proprietor of self hatred's evil" are " pleading for it's healing"wonderful insight..Awesome Ink..truly enjoyed!!!
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re: Re: "For they know not what they slay..."
19th Apr 2014 4:58pm
Aaaaawwwww thank you my friend
I'm flattered :) appreciate your continued support :)
I'm flattered :) appreciate your continued support :)