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Another 15 Minutes
I'll take the blackness every day
shudder as I collapse into the tunnel.
10 minutes of putrid fucking hell
and the 5 minutes of heavenly warmth.
Breathe life into me
bring me back from the outer plane
I escaped eternity.
shudder as I collapse into the tunnel.
10 minutes of putrid fucking hell
and the 5 minutes of heavenly warmth.
Breathe life into me
bring me back from the outer plane
I escaped eternity.
Published 16th Apr 2014
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21st Apr 2014 2:20pm
Pushed to the edge ... ? The problem is we all to tend to take it a little further each time ...
... Cool ink on trying to find the light
... Cool ink on trying to find the light
19th Aug 2014 12:14pm
so much going on in so little words, I really like this poem...I've read some of your other poetry and you have a way with word's...a beautiful mind at that!!
19th Aug 2014 3:43pm
Thanks lazycloud, glad to hear you've enjoyed my work, what attracted you to this particular piece? :-)
19th Aug 2014 9:23pm
how you manage to escape reality just for a short time only to be captured at the last moment? I often feel eternity would be the place to be any other place but here in the physical world, if I could escape from here I would def gladly suffer for a taste of heaven..
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24th Aug 2014 10:36pm
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