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whispered thoughts
The fire in your breath is the heat of desire caressed by the thoughts brushed with my whispering echoes that deeply penetrate within pants of the rhythm of your fingers dancing from my strings
Coupled by the laces of my trance, hypnotically owned I vine throughout with engorged visions that play with your moans stirring with copper flesh dripping sweet nectar
3 words arches your back with forces lifted from my tongue when my soft lips brush your earlobes demanding
“cum for me slut
oh yes that’s my good girl
cum for me”
Coupled by the laces of my trance, hypnotically owned I vine throughout with engorged visions that play with your moans stirring with copper flesh dripping sweet nectar
3 words arches your back with forces lifted from my tongue when my soft lips brush your earlobes demanding
“cum for me slut
oh yes that’s my good girl
cum for me”
Published 16th Apr 2014
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16th Apr 2014 7:14pm
"Coupled by the laces of my trance, hypnotically owned I vine throughout with engorged visions that play with your moans stirring with copper flesh dripping sweet nectar"<--Damnnnnn! Love that! Xo
'Talk dirty to me'
'Talk dirty to me'
17th Apr 2014 3:09pm
Crazy thing, I was only gonna post that single line. Thank you for bringing sweet droplets of your being to my page
16th Apr 2014 10:07pm
17th Apr 2014 3:12pm
"seductive poetic work of erotic art" ;) so honored by your comment, your graces are pleasing
17th Apr 2014 6:12am
"Coupled by the laces of my trance, hypnotically owned I vine throughout with engorged visions that play with your moans stirring with copper flesh dripping sweet nectar"
^^^ simply gorgeous. love the imagery you've painted here.
^^^ simply gorgeous. love the imagery you've painted here.
17th Apr 2014 3:22pm
Just shadows coming to light with the illumination of inspiration of the great poets that shine around me such as yourself. Thank you so much Shadoe
17th Apr 2014 1:46pm
I'm panting prose style :) You pretty much just wrote a Haibun. A Few lines in prose followed by a haiku. Awesome form and flow with such poetic beauty. Nice lacing of your hypnotic layering's.
17th Apr 2014 3:24pm
This means a lot coming from a true artist, you challenge me constantly. Thank you always
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- Edited 18th Apr 2014 7:10am
18th Apr 2014 7:05am
Sweet Soul.....good to be back reading you again. Beautiful! Your words caress my thoughts and awakens my senses. Very sexy! :)
18th Apr 2014 2:17pm
18th Apr 2014 2:57pm
Very powerful! You definitely have a way of making a girl want to lose control.
18th Apr 2014 7:45pm
Be lost within thy lines, for they are the strings that harness you.....Thank you for your comments
10th May 2014 3:31am
'The fire in your breath is the heat of desire caressed by the thoughts brushed with my whispering echoes " wonderfully sensual and erotic.. a vivid and pleasurable read..with deepest respect.domore
10th May 2014 2:50pm
Domore, your visits always brighten my days and heat up my nights, thank you
