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knowing Touch
Satisfied
the way I like
my needs
imprinted on his knowing touch
plays me from a slow sonata to
1812 explosive finality
till laying still with our breathing sounds
As we spoon
he's got my back covered
his worn out flesh
still hot against my bum
The juice we gave making its
slow journey
feeling this just sends me
As I said
he knows my needs all to well
feeling it's slow movement
reawakening
as i lay patiently in the dark
to be taken once more
the way I like
my needs
imprinted on his knowing touch
plays me from a slow sonata to
1812 explosive finality
till laying still with our breathing sounds
As we spoon
he's got my back covered
his worn out flesh
still hot against my bum
The juice we gave making its
slow journey
feeling this just sends me
As I said
he knows my needs all to well
feeling it's slow movement
reawakening
as i lay patiently in the dark
to be taken once more
Published 16th Apr 2014
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16th Apr 2014 1:36pm
16th Apr 2014 2:12pm
Patience is a worthy tool when love comes to town
Failing that the 'wandering hand' helps too
hehe
Failing that the 'wandering hand' helps too
hehe
16th Apr 2014 4:10pm
16th Apr 2014 4:42pm
It's a rare thing
as he knows the way I move within
my needs.
but.. hey..I'm adventurous I like discovering
his lands with my inquisitive hands
always with the right answers
he gives
meets with an approving sigh
showing him he done good
why he lays here
with me
as he knows the way I move within
my needs.
but.. hey..I'm adventurous I like discovering
his lands with my inquisitive hands
always with the right answers
he gives
meets with an approving sigh
showing him he done good
why he lays here
with me
16th Apr 2014 7:23pm
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17th Apr 2014 8:50am
that it is John
crashing symbols banging drums and cannon fire thrown in for good measure too :)
crashing symbols banging drums and cannon fire thrown in for good measure too :)
17th Apr 2014 3:49pm
Love how he plays you and takes you from a 'slow sonata to 1812 explosive finality'....he certainly has your back...lol
17th Apr 2014 4:06pm
18th Apr 2014 4:56am
This is tres sexy Rose! You've captured some some of the simple yet highly erotic feelings of the sexual experience...this is an awesome passage:
"his worn out flesh
still hot against my bum
The juice we gave making its
slow journey"
"his worn out flesh
still hot against my bum
The juice we gave making its
slow journey"
18th Apr 2014 5:21am
All us girls remember those
glorious moments after making out
where you just spoon back into your man
especially if he hasn't pulled out.. get my drift
are there many things finer than a subtle push
or squeeze to say
wakey wakey Mr
I'm not finished with you
I need more...
Thankyou soo much Gahd for the list add glad you liked it so
glorious moments after making out
where you just spoon back into your man
especially if he hasn't pulled out.. get my drift
are there many things finer than a subtle push
or squeeze to say
wakey wakey Mr
I'm not finished with you
I need more...
Thankyou soo much Gahd for the list add glad you liked it so
20th Apr 2014 11:36pm
21st Apr 2014 5:07am
13th Jul 2014 9:14am
you arouse me just like a tsunami which came and took everything away and hopefully will cum again to return all it took away and the soft flesh will harden as before and much longer stay as the next tsunami perhaps cummms again along the same imaginary pathway of my lover till the ultimate tsunami cummsss inside each other stay we may
13th Jul 2014 10:17am
13th Jul 2014 6:36pm
