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Crushed Underground
he walks into my heart
through words written
graceful from the start
until the very end
he twists his words
forming sharp knives
plunging into my mind
opening up old wounds
yet truth he shares
resounds in my awareness
wishes that beginnings
can start at the ending.
through words written
graceful from the start
until the very end
he twists his words
forming sharp knives
plunging into my mind
opening up old wounds
yet truth he shares
resounds in my awareness
wishes that beginnings
can start at the ending.
Published 16th Apr 2014
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16th Apr 2014 1:40am
Anonymous
16th Apr 2014 5:45am
The second stanza is unpredictably powerful with its imagery, or your imagery I should say, haha. This is a great write! Very eerie but so real too.
21st Apr 2014 1:30pm
16th Apr 2014 9:32pm
I love the whole poem but yeah! That second stanza took it there for me! Wow Grace! Good luck!
21st Apr 2014 1:30pm
