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ScrEAm...
*So some believe, others do not either way
life, for future generations are in great peril
if as a 'whole people' don't stop jeopardizing
Our greatest resources, n ourselves*
Scream...
For the edge
of your end nears...
Scream,
prelusive to thy
burgeoning fears...
Smear the kiss of death
in the gallows of thine soul
betwixt sacraments of angelic
aspersions, and the sanctimonious
lechery of lucifer's incendiary scroll...
Scream...
Albeit predestined art thou
ques mankind's ultimate fate?
As destruction of thy brother
and thyself may only reap
A
dead
S
I
L
E
N
T
scream, at redemption's gate...
life, for future generations are in great peril
if as a 'whole people' don't stop jeopardizing
Our greatest resources, n ourselves*
Scream...
For the edge
of your end nears...
Scream,
prelusive to thy
burgeoning fears...
Smear the kiss of death
in the gallows of thine soul
betwixt sacraments of angelic
aspersions, and the sanctimonious
lechery of lucifer's incendiary scroll...
Scream...
Albeit predestined art thou
ques mankind's ultimate fate?
As destruction of thy brother
and thyself may only reap
A
dead
S
I
L
E
N
T
scream, at redemption's gate...
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15th Apr 2014 3:18pm
Invoking visions of multitudes in peril...as the silent scream fails to penetrate...sigh...You've been on a branch out lately..enjoying!
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15th Apr 2014 3:30pm
I have!? N why pray tell haven't u offered
a ladder to get me down safely!!?? lmao
Thank u sweetness, treasure u! :)
a ladder to get me down safely!!?? lmao
Thank u sweetness, treasure u! :)
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15th Apr 2014 3:47pm
Thank you my darling lady, as always I'm greatly appreciative of your continued support :)
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15th Apr 2014 4:03pm
This is a unique piece. Very well done. Sends out a great message. Much admire :)
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15th Apr 2014 5:05pm
"betwixt sacraments of angelic
aspersions, and the sanctimonious
lechery of lucifer's incendiary scroll..."
^^^that was glazed in all kinds of beauty!
I ScrEAm --> This rocked hon! Xo
aspersions, and the sanctimonious
lechery of lucifer's incendiary scroll..."
^^^that was glazed in all kinds of beauty!
I ScrEAm --> This rocked hon! Xo
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16th Apr 2014 3:30am
Aaaawwww shucks my sweet Rain, u have me blushing n all! :)
Gracias! you rock my sweetness :)
Gracias! you rock my sweetness :)
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15th Apr 2014 5:07pm
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15th Apr 2014 9:48pm
Exquisite Scribe Poetik... powerful and insightful love the ending ..the first thought it brought to mind was "do no go gently into that good night" by Dylan Thomas...in this case it should be do not go silently,we are given one voice,one life,make it count..use it or lose it..enjoyed as always!!!
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16th Apr 2014 3:32am
PD you know I'm always happy when you come round here n leave your sweetness on my pages! Thank you so much :)
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16th Apr 2014 1:41am
Sensationally written, I love the crazy stanzas and this bit:
Scream,
prelusive to thy
burgeoning fears...
You make for a fine read my dear x
Scream,
prelusive to thy
burgeoning fears...
You make for a fine read my dear x
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16th Apr 2014 4:56am
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16th Apr 2014 12:21pm
I believe it ALL comes from within, our choices shape our destiny and nothing is preordained. But that is my way of thinking of course.
Great piece Poetikmind. :)
Great piece Poetikmind. :)
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16th Apr 2014 3:09pm
Well well! I am very happy to see u on my page again lady! Been awhile, hope all is well :) n thanks for your thoughts always :)
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17th Apr 2014 12:21pm
Does it matter anyway what I say?
Fore they have said it all... .
*well written* ..... <3
Fore they have said it all... .
*well written* ..... <3
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17th Apr 2014 5:51pm
Aaaawwww my sweet sweet Lee, thank you much
my dear! Appreciate your support always :)
my dear! Appreciate your support always :)
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Anonymous
18th Apr 2014 8:00am
Thought provoking write. Have felt like screaming in this past week. Some times I did.....but inside myself. Very powerful write. :)
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18th Apr 2014 12:17pm
Yea I understand that feeling lady...
Truly thank n appreciate u my friend :)
Truly thank n appreciate u my friend :)