Pussy Pleaser

Lovely Crim, here's hoping he feels you, trusting he enjoys your taste. Wicked spicy!  :)

thank you sexy VP :) with love Crim

immaculate drippings, I don't think you'll convince with the vulnerable, however. Cunning little cunting :)

thank you lovely one :) I know it's hard to believe but this one makes me feel like a little girl vulnerable.. with love Crim

In every line, I say, "Nice Work!"

thank you kindly :) with love Crim

Mmmmmm! How can he resist to feel you, taste you with a write like this. Sexy voice here. Enjoyed! :)

thank you lovely Flower :) with love Crim

There she's goes again being all trampy n offering up
that heated coochie for pleasure, damn shame
It ain't for me lmao... Hot stuff lady! :)

thank you Poe making me blush wildly :) with love Crim

This king of cock is just lucky. Your words are insastiable!! Keep inking and creaming!

thank you Bale for such a great comment :) with love Crim

I can picture you in your little schoolgirl outfit, seductive under your shyness...

yes John with ponytails and all to match my school girl outfit ;) thank you for the love.. with love Crim

Goddamn Brenda, you can say the
things that make a man 3000 miles
away stand at attention and salute
you.

Such a seducing, enticing poetress
thou art; what words of enchantment
I would whisper in thine ear to make
you, "open up," and speak arousement
to the animal in my heart

   A welcome return to DUP... Pan

Pan you are a poetess's poet you make me blush wildly with your seductive words thank you :) with love Brenda

every time i read you, i want to go out and molest someone ^.^
a wickedly sensual piece, beautiful Brenda xo

giggling wildly at your comment.. thank you lovely Mia with love Brenda :)

Hot! Hot! Hot!  Loved every delicious line!  Whew! :)

thank you kindly :) with love Crim

Seductive pleaser!!

thank you lovely one :) with love Crim

The air is thick with your essence
The taste of life burning at two ends
wild flavors of living fast and scorched heart
A taste I so desire to command and mend

Wicked write my dear, seductive.  loved it

thank you Soul for the wonderful poem comment :) I always love your visits with love Crim

YES!!!

Great write Ms. Brenda
A Treasure too read!!

Sir Lancelott

thank you kindly Sir Lance :) with love Brenda

I love these sumptuous lines, Crim, especially "creaming out my submission" and "pisses verses down my throat" gives an extreme and provocative tinge. Really this poem is the ultimate male fantasy; the subject of this poem has truly mastered your desire, body and pulsing pussy. A standing ovation from me, unbelievably hot writing!

thank you most kindly Murder for a most gracious comment making me smile :) with love Crim

then what I desired was achieved ;) with love Crim