Shade

We would combust
Only ashes would remain

thank you Poet for making me smile :) with love Brenda

This fiery perception is delectable:) love it, Crim*

thank you beautiful Angel I love your comments :) with love Crim

But we would have an understanding of what us was all about.  And that would carry the day.
xo

:) Poet with love Brenda

Another enjoyable write from you Brenda.

You always put so much passion into
your scribes.

I'm sure any man who you would allow
the pleasure of your company would
combust from your fire.


   Peace and Love... Thomas

thank you Thomas for your beautiful heart touching comment making me blush a bit :) with love Brenda

Everything turns to ashes or dust eventually crim
Better to try and lose than not try at all :)

too true though this one intimidates the hell out of me :) with love Crim

whether peripheral or not yr a vision by word Crim  - compelling write

thank you for the lovely words Whale :) with love Crim

This man allows no lass to dance very long in his shadow.
Masterfully composed. You rock!
Lovely Crim, keep dancing. Tick-tock ....   :)

VP you made me smile with your comment thank you :) with love Crim

I Love this Crim... a sweet realization of The self denial of an encounter...
Some times its better when we play the tape all the way through


Beautifully written

XOXO
Fire

thank you lovely Flower :) with love Crim

a wild life of my own  
we would probably combust  
we're we ever to crash into each other

I love this stanza Brenda, its one of those passionate things that can happen once in a person's life.,but do we take the chance?!
Excellent write!

that's the question lovely Nikki thank you beautiful soul :) with love Brenda

Where flames bloom, shades hug the periphery. Sounds like someone we could all do with brighten up our days with some burning life.

Thank you Lord Viddax yes we could all use this type of fire to brighten our day :) with love Crim

unable to navigate  
your labyrinth heart

I love those lines.
This poem is marvelous!

thank you kindly Brittany for making me smile :) with love Crim

"your tender core  
a pyrotechnic of emotion  
buried under your steely exterior "   great lines!!  love this ink.. you consistently exhibit such emotion and depth in your writing, You've talent like no other :)  with love and respect.. xoxo domore

thank you for such a gracious comment touching my heart :) with love Crim

such raging fire won't last the night
but it gives a brilliant light!

(to paraphrase Edna St.Vincent Millay)...

An apt quote John thank you :) with love Crim

 
"knowing I would be burned  
by the fire that is you  
I shelter in the shade"
That right there was beyond potent!
Yup my friend You're always raw, real,
n 'write on' when u spill! :)

thank you Poe for the smile this morning :) with love Crim

I might not see you,but I feel you (cool)

thank you Hash I feel you too :) with love Crim

Beautifully passionate poem. Loved this! :)

thank you kindly beautiful Tommie :) with love Crim

What a write and pleasure to read. I have felt this way. Thank you once again for showing us inside  the Lady we luv. Xo :)

thank you lovely Flower for such an endearing comment touching my heart :) with love Crim

Dancing on the edge of shadows
compelled to take a leap of faith
into the focus of desired peripheral
or plummet further into my own wraith

The almighty question, some envy those that have such an existence to have such a choice, others wish to never have them.  Which answer can your heart not live with.

Beautiful write Crim, so provoking

thank you Soul for your beautiful poem comment and your compelling words of encouragement :) with love Crim

"unable to navigate  
your labyrinth heart  
a maze of corridors  
that I get lost in"<-- so lovely, Crim!

Your ink is always softly driven....Xo  

thank you lovely Rain :) with love Crim

this is truly beautiful Brenda. your passion burns brightly.

thank you lovely Mia for the smile you put on my face today :) with love Brenda

That is beautiful

thank you lovely one :) with love Crim