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Lisa The Dominatrix
She enters the room
and brings the heat
adorned in latex
dragging your chains behind her
you look at her slyly
"on your knees slave
obey your Queen"
you drop to your knees fast
"forgive my ignorance
mistress Lisssa"
to bold for your own good
you take the whip to your back
"now lick my boots you've been bad"
"gladly mistress Lisa"
you say with a wink in your eye
ten more lashes for an insolent slave
now collared and chained
Lisa's ready to bring on the pain
"say my name slave and say it right"
you speak eagerly
you're naughty looking
forward to the beating
"mmmistress Lisa you stutter"
her beauty has you mesmerized
hair of red, soul of fire
she's your Goddess
demanding you lick her pussy
you have anticipated this hungrily
tasting her flavor savoring her juices
as she creams in your face
then giving your hard cock a stroke
you convulse with pleasure
ejaculating instantly
now sated you thank her gratefully
"did I say you could speak?"
"no, now get out of here"
and brings the heat
adorned in latex
dragging your chains behind her
you look at her slyly
"on your knees slave
obey your Queen"
you drop to your knees fast
"forgive my ignorance
mistress Lisssa"
to bold for your own good
you take the whip to your back
"now lick my boots you've been bad"
"gladly mistress Lisa"
you say with a wink in your eye
ten more lashes for an insolent slave
now collared and chained
Lisa's ready to bring on the pain
"say my name slave and say it right"
you speak eagerly
you're naughty looking
forward to the beating
"mmmistress Lisa you stutter"
her beauty has you mesmerized
hair of red, soul of fire
she's your Goddess
demanding you lick her pussy
you have anticipated this hungrily
tasting her flavor savoring her juices
as she creams in your face
then giving your hard cock a stroke
you convulse with pleasure
ejaculating instantly
now sated you thank her gratefully
"did I say you could speak?"
"no, now get out of here"
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Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 5:18pm
You seem to know how this goes. I take it you've done this before?
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re: Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 5:22pm
I know the submissive side but have fantasized about being a Dominatrix thank you for your visit making me smile :) with love Crim
Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 5:24pm
Well your words tell me you would fit the role of dominatrix well, fantasize on miss
~Bale
~Bale
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re: Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 9:20pm
Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 5:38pm
Thank you. As a man, I needed affirmation that not all women were entrapped by '50 Shades Of Grey' and the cult of 'Demure Disney Princess'.
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re: Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 5:57pm
Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 6:40pm
If that's a fantasy sweets GO for it. Make some Money while your at it!!
Great write Brenda!!!
Love the read!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write Brenda!!!
Love the read!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 6:54pm
Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 6:41pm
I'm sorry...I had to laugh a bit, because my name is "Lisa" and it's just so not me. LOL :D Much love to you, though!
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re: Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 6:56pm
Lisa is my fantasy Dominatrix name it's a beautiful name ML thank you for your visit glad I could make you laugh :) with love Crim
Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 7:10pm
Compliant lips kiss leather
Soft and tough together
Kneeling to black heels
The pedestal of my higher power
Sexy write Crim, the huntress within you is speaking.
Soft and tough together
Kneeling to black heels
The pedestal of my higher power
Sexy write Crim, the huntress within you is speaking.
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re: Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 7:26pm
thank you for the poem comment Soul I love it! also for the sexy words of encouragement :) with love Crim
Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 7:39pm
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29th Mar 2014 8:12pm
Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 8:25pm
This is a cool write Brenda.
I like how you added the alter-ego too.
It sounds like you have your fantasy
worked-out.
Try, role-revearsal sometime.
You and I could do a good collaboration.
Enjoyed this... Panl
I like how you added the alter-ego too.
It sounds like you have your fantasy
worked-out.
Try, role-revearsal sometime.
You and I could do a good collaboration.
Enjoyed this... Panl
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re: Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 8:36pm
A collaboration would be a lot of fun :) thank you Pan for digging this write :) with love Brenda
Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 8:42pm
Kiss your boots yes, lick em? only if u spill pussy juice on them otherwise it'd be bland! Lmao jk... Hot stuff my dear! :)
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re: Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
29th Mar 2014 8:55pm
you always make me laugh Poe yes my boots would be slick with pussy juices ;) with love Crim
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29th Mar 2014 9:43pm
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29th Mar 2014 11:09pm
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29th Mar 2014 10:25pm
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29th Mar 2014 11:10pm
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30th Mar 2014 7:28am
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30th Mar 2014 7:11am
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30th Mar 2014 7:28am
Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
Anonymous
30th Mar 2014 10:15pm
Oooooo! Is this a bit of another side of the you lurking inside your soul. LOL!!! hot wicked write. Mmmmmm! Warmed my blood up. Enjoyed! :)
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re: Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
30th Mar 2014 10:41pm
Re: Lisa The Dominatrix
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Apr 2014 10:21pm
4th Apr 2014 10:19pm
What I wouldn't give to meet Lisa, she seems like a fun girl! I enjoyed the savage sexual lines of this poem, and that third to last stanza is music to my ears. Bravo Crim!
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5th Apr 2014 11:35pm