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The Skins
I don't like any of you
I sit atop my cloud
and watch.
watching you need and beg,
humility or humiliation?
either way it's laughable.
I cannot envy your ardency for acceptance
it baffles me, the great thinker.
perhaps that's how sheep lick their wounds,
they fill them with the opinions of others.
I sit atop my cloud
and watch.
watching you need and beg,
humility or humiliation?
either way it's laughable.
I cannot envy your ardency for acceptance
it baffles me, the great thinker.
perhaps that's how sheep lick their wounds,
they fill them with the opinions of others.
Published 19th Mar 2014
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Anonymous
19th Mar 2014 8:43pm
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19th Mar 2014 9:31pm
19th Mar 2014 8:52pm
I love the attitude and strength of this poem! great inking.. with respect Crim
19th Mar 2014 9:32pm
20th Mar 2014 00:31am
Anonymous
20th Mar 2014 1:11am
Sounds like a jealous Angel.... Well done for the honest language, like it was thought out loud, Mike.
20th Mar 2014 4:02pm
20th Mar 2014 7:11pm
24th Mar 2014 1:21am
Fecedia, never confuse popularity with respect.
I cannot envy your ardency for acceptance
it baffles me, the great thinker.
perhaps that's how sheep lick their wounds,
they fill them with the opinions of others.
Never believe anything someone else says about you. The most useful and sincere criticism I can ever give an artist is a discussion of their works EFFECT on ME or others, not of them.
I cannot envy your ardency for acceptance
it baffles me, the great thinker.
perhaps that's how sheep lick their wounds,
they fill them with the opinions of others.
Never believe anything someone else says about you. The most useful and sincere criticism I can ever give an artist is a discussion of their works EFFECT on ME or others, not of them.
4th Apr 2014 7:13pm
Yes Yes Nik,
The Sheoples and their Evils !!!! SMH
Strong sentiment expressed in these words, and like Sansaint-....
"perhaps that's how sheep lick their wounds,
they fill them with the opinions of others"
You tell em Ms. Moe !!!
The Sheoples and their Evils !!!! SMH
Strong sentiment expressed in these words, and like Sansaint-....
"perhaps that's how sheep lick their wounds,
they fill them with the opinions of others"
You tell em Ms. Moe !!!
