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Footprints *
Footprints around my heart
from top to bottom
and on every side
surrounding me with love
walking with my spirit
tiptoeing softly
gentle and pure
I hear your steps
feel your breath
and I know
you are always there.
* inspired by flowergirls heart of footprints picture
from top to bottom
and on every side
surrounding me with love
walking with my spirit
tiptoeing softly
gentle and pure
I hear your steps
feel your breath
and I know
you are always there.
* inspired by flowergirls heart of footprints picture
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Re: Footprints *
19th Mar 2014 00:11am
When someone loves you, they will always be there no matter what. Good read, Hashman.
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19th Mar 2014 00:57am
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19th Mar 2014 00:12am
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Anonymous
19th Mar 2014 00:40am
Wowser! This is a beautiful write. You captured the way it made me feel when I saw it. I think it's awesome it inspired your creativeness. RL for me for this brilliant write. :)
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19th Mar 2014 1:00am
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19th Mar 2014 00:42am
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19th Mar 2014 1:02am
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19th Mar 2014 1:49am
Your words tend to bloom into their on artistry, I admire your talent.
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19th Mar 2014 2:33am
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19th Mar 2014 11:18pm
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19th Mar 2014 1:36pm
what a beautiful and tender write to wake up to thank you Hash :) with love and respect Crim
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19th Mar 2014 11:23pm
Good morning my lady (a little late but that's ok) and thanks for the smile :)
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19th Mar 2014 3:11pm
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19th Mar 2014 7:33pm
0, my Friend...
This is breath-taking! To be sure--it is the magic in the union that one experiences in a true anam chara!
A poem that left its imprints upon my heart...
Captivating in it's Creativity!
This is breath-taking! To be sure--it is the magic in the union that one experiences in a true anam chara!
A poem that left its imprints upon my heart...
Captivating in it's Creativity!
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19th Mar 2014 11:26pm
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21st Mar 2014 2:21pm
enjoyed your poem...I felt your words describing how we must " feel " the love of our self, before we can relate to another. thanks for sharing.
Have a great day !
Have a great day !
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21st Mar 2014 10:43pm
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22nd Mar 2014 1:13pm
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22nd Mar 2014 1:23pm
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Anonymous
22nd Mar 2014 6:42pm
Mr. Hash this is simply beautiful!!! Those footprints left behind will never erase as long as there's a beating heart.
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22nd Mar 2014 7:44pm
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Anonymous
23rd Mar 2014 2:13pm
So beautiful and cute. Good one :)
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Anonymous
27th Mar 2014 6:39pm
This is very romantic and beautiful. Bravo!
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27th Mar 2014 7:43pm