My Cheating Heart

Oooh...love the ending.. you are the total package too.. brilliant writing. devouring the poet is very tasty, indeed :)

thank you beautiful Angel for such a great comment :) with love and respect Crim

speaking for myself, I like writing life raw & downbeat, & I won't deny loving the effect it has on the ladies. I'm sure my comrades feel the same. it's how we connect...

It is indeed how we connect and I can't deny I lust after the writer in you John though also out of reach sigh :) with love and respect Crim

I'm so excited for you Lily it will be great I'm sure.. thank you for understanding and connecting with this write :) with love and respect Crim

awww dammit, I got a cheating heart too....
lustful mind, delicious thoughts, sensual fantasies at fingertip reach. I can relate to this ink, Crim! A joy to read! Xo

thank you lovely Rain for understanding my lustful cheating heart :) with love and respect Brenda

Lovely Crim, this is insightful, genuine and oh, so accurate.
I salute your writing prowess. I enjoy the taste, love the burn!

Your not-so-secret Admirer  :)

thank you VP for putting a wicked smile on my face :) with love and respect Crim

Cool write Crim - you're a great journey

thank you kindly Whale :) with love and respect Crim

for me, it was his mouth... so sensually curved and still so fucking arrogant i wanted to both punch and kiss it from his face lol

we all have cheating hearts that race just a little faster when seduced by words. loved this Brenda.

thank you Mia you always understand me.. beautiful one :) with love and the deepest respect Brenda

You have an incredibly amazing
command of diction.
No matter how long or short you
paint a vivid landscape that
leaves me in awe.

I enjoy your every contribution.

I think that, that is the excitement
in life: the gritty, raw, rough and
feral lifestyle and am myself trying
to transfuse into my writings.

Another masterpiece from you Crim.


   Peace... Pan

you humble me Pan I often feel inept with my choice of words.. thank you so much for such an awesome comment :) with love and respect Crim

Great truth in your poem, I completely understand the feeling, loving the burn myself, thanks for sharing Crim. :)

thank you Tommie for understanding and loving the burn yourself :) with love and respect Crim

Delicious and naughty!!

thank you lovely lady :) with love and respect Crim

Firstly, I like the message in this poem, but I couldn't help but think that you make a point here that it's only men that can write with conviction. I guess this poem just made me think that's all.

The last two lines is a perfect finisher to this. I did enjoy the read.

Thank you Missy though I see your point you yourself have a very strong voice.. I guess I was just talking about how men get to me.. thank you for the read and insight :) with love and respect Crim

Wow what a powerful heartfelt honor you pay to those guys
that give you that...I'd bet they feel likewise about you lady
becuz to ass can WRITE! :)

thank you Poe making me smile wide :) with love and respect Crim

Temptress curves shadowed in laces of ink
Every letter traced with my finger tips
reaching into the pages to only taste
the fire of lust of my own sweating lips

Such truth found in your words displayed in great poetry.

what a sensual poem comment making me blush thank you Soul :) with love and respect Crim

This is kind of the way I feel about some of my favorite female writers on here... amazing write, as always :)

So glad you can relate and I'm not alone Kitty thank you :) with love and respect Crim

How their words echo thru our hearts. Inspiring outstanding pieces like this to be created. Some filling fantasies that hide in our dreams. Luv this! :)

These poet do touch the soul and mind inspiring fantasies thank you lovely Flower :) much love Crim

a fine tribute to all ur favourite male writers lol ...
very simple , tender n less dark than few of ur  writes that I've read lately but still awesome ....
great job ..thanks for sharing.

keep rolling

cyanide..

thank you Cyanide though I'm sure my dark side shall emerge again :) with love and respect Crim

Wow this is awesome wow just wow

thank you kind Sir :) with love and respect Crim

Ahhh there is something enchanting about them Crim.  Hard on the outside with a delicious soft center.

Great piece dear lady :)

yes you're so right Magdalena thank you :) with love and respect Crim