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When Death Pricked Me

As a child during my first fever did I weep
My first time between wakefulness and sleep
I saw the world but did not perceive myself
Unable to move my body or call for help
My identity was obliterated, my ego dissolved
My first experience of the abyss: completely engulfed
Death pricked me with his boney finger
And the feeling left me not but ever did linger
Written by jswissman
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