una noche de sueños (3-word-lines challenge to myself)

To see something new by you! Love your writing.

To see something new by you! Love your writing.

thanks, splendid! just messing around, figured i'd post something finally. [:

i hate rules.. but this experiment turned out really well. i've been tempted to try writing in confined formats to see what happens, but have always refrained. this is encouraging :)

thanks! i do that too, now, just for exercise. [:

my kind of night-out! this is beautiful-- I feel like I'm in a glimmering moonlit stream of your consciousness while reading this (seriously this poem gave me that feel...) and since jack rejected me recently maybe I'll just hang-out with you then some other time. Love it, babe! :-)

thank you so much. :D it was sort of a vein of consciousness/fantasy, late night writing to get the words flowing again. hey, you pick the day, i'm there- jack rejected me too. :(

You're ladies.  I, on the other hand, Jack has  invited over for tea and sex.  So, in your faces?


I liked this poem a lot.  Reminded me of my wilder days (well, the beginnings of them actually).  The structure left me a little confused when you had to run over lines to complete a thought.  I see the constraints you worked within and you did brilliantly.  I wonder...  would you consider writing another like this that had to be only one three word phrase/idea per line?  That would be a challenge.  If you think you're up to it. :)

oh no you didn't. an "in your face" to me, my friend, AND a challenge? i will rock it, dearest PTM. and i fully expect you to at least consider doing the same. [:

TONIGHT!!!

It shall be done.

hmmm? i'm eagerly awaiting this work of art, PTM, for i know you will be thorough!

'by youth's yawning    
fools in love' You're such a little star with your words, J, you took this one home and smoked it. Brilliant.

thanks LA! so glad you liked it. [:

si, soy un caballo de un truco,  desafortunadamente, pero yo intento. [:  

secreto: utilizo generalmente una herramienta de traducción cuando necesito ayuda.

muchas gracias. [:

me gusta mucho este título

i thought the poem flowed brilliantly as well, plenty of beautiful imagery and originality!

thank you so much, welcome to DUP. [:

i love ur poems!!!!

thank you for reading, i'm quite fond of yours myself! [:

Another masterstroke.

Multiverse in a box.

Speaks at so many levels.

And like your previous works

Silent. :)

i so much appreciate when someone bothers to sift through my oldies...thank you again. [:

About going thru oldies

"I would be here awhile
Trapped in the hourglass
The needle pointing at you
And my eyes stuck on the verse
Of this revolving universe
I have but leaped across
A few planets and a capricious moon
The galaxy awaits and then the giant void.."

Sueños capturados, sueños deseados y sueños realizados.

dreams captured, dreams desired and dreams that are realized.

very nice.

gypsy red

agreed, and thanks so much, gypsy...

Spanish is beautiful, always wish i'd retained more of what i'd learned. [:

Anytime you need help, holler, I write in Spanish a lot it´s my first language there is a couple of pieces here that I wrote in dual language and one that has both Spanish and English version take a look and tell me what ya think. (Femme Fatale,"deadly woman")(Last night I had a dream...)
 
 
gypsy red aka la gitana