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loves last breath
Disconnected, reaching out. Immune to affection, crumbling down.
Shallow water, in too deep. Don't bother to look before you leap.out of breath, let love rest in peace.
Under silent protest, spiral and desend. Emotionally suppressed, when will it end? The charade's not over yet, still waiting for loves last breath
Shallow water, in too deep. Don't bother to look before you leap.out of breath, let love rest in peace.
Under silent protest, spiral and desend. Emotionally suppressed, when will it end? The charade's not over yet, still waiting for loves last breath
Published 25th Feb 2014
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25th Feb 2014 12:06pm
25th Feb 2014 4:59pm
"Shallow water, in too deep. Don't bother to look before you leap.out of breath, let love rest in peace."
deep...personal.. relatable.... very nice work!
deep...personal.. relatable.... very nice work!
