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ouch

that awkward moment
when someone hates you

she was here first so theres not much I can do
i’m a little confused kuz her writing sucks
so maybe she’s jealous
like I give two fucks

I think she hates men
though it could just be me
by the way, she’s the one who thinks i’m a creep

she thinks I need help
she deduced that from my writing
it’s a pathetic person who finds words frightening

with her immense knowledge of my personal life
she feels qualified to comment on the things I write

i’m really quite hurt and a little surprised
one of those unpleasant encounters in life

I liked it here, the dark side of words
all the great minds seem to converge

but if you don’t want to see me anymore just show me the door
I can take a hint and I never really wanted the floor

I sent her an apology in case I had actually offended her
I offered to take it down, if it was really bothering her
she ignored all of that
she even messaged me and told me to quit
that was her advice, should I listen to it?

If you want me to leave, just let me know.
lets have a vote in the comments below
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