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Loving and loved
he looks at her
as she laughs
adoration in his eyes
she touches his cheek
tenderly
sliced mango shared
great grandchildren
running around
the eternal lovers
huddle at the balcony
a baby crawls
and flops on her lap
she hugs him
as he gently caress
the baby's head
A grandchild calls
for dinner
the crowd of fifty,
four generations
congregate for grace
They lean towards each other
years peeling off
their aged eyes
smiling, holding hands
they stand up, walk away
looking back at their
fruits of love
they know everything
is alright
smiling, they leave
'they passed away peacefully'
the obituary read
they wonder why they died
together, though ninety nine
is a ripe old age
Their loving they gave
and they were loved.
as she laughs
adoration in his eyes
she touches his cheek
tenderly
sliced mango shared
great grandchildren
running around
the eternal lovers
huddle at the balcony
a baby crawls
and flops on her lap
she hugs him
as he gently caress
the baby's head
A grandchild calls
for dinner
the crowd of fifty,
four generations
congregate for grace
They lean towards each other
years peeling off
their aged eyes
smiling, holding hands
they stand up, walk away
looking back at their
fruits of love
they know everything
is alright
smiling, they leave
'they passed away peacefully'
the obituary read
they wonder why they died
together, though ninety nine
is a ripe old age
Their loving they gave
and they were loved.
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13th Feb 2014 00:29am
Re: Loving and loved
13th Feb 2014 1:45am
A very sweet tribute to those who manage to love for many years....... lovely write..... :)
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13th Feb 2014 2:22am
Yes, thank you scarletvelvet...kind words from you and yes, its a tribute to those who loved until the end.
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13th Feb 2014 1:49am
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13th Feb 2014 2:24am
BoltUpright, thank you so much for swinging by and reading. Indeed it is quiet contentment.
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14th Feb 2014 3:18am
Such a passionate write Grace, always enjoyed.
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14th Feb 2014 4:22am
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14th Feb 2014 12:07pm
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14th Feb 2014 10:28pm
That is true romance and love. Warm and welcoming piece Grace. Wonderfully expressed.
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15th Feb 2014 11:38am