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Will you be...?
My sweet, precious valentine
I so wish I were on your mind
as lost in our love we’d be for all time
you’d be the beat in the heart of mine
Dear beautiful, desireable, sensual you
gosh darn girl you really haven’t a clue
passionate this love seeps
so very deep for only you
so tell me now, why pass
on a heart forever true?
Baby, my sassy, tasty, sexy honey dove
on this earth, you’ll find no greater love
prefect would be our fit, a hand within a glove
tenderly we'd kiss, ascending to the clouds above
Oh please, oh please will you be my darling valentine
can’t you see, we were meant to be forever entwined
So please tell me now...will you be my sweet Valentine?
I so wish I were on your mind
as lost in our love we’d be for all time
you’d be the beat in the heart of mine
Dear beautiful, desireable, sensual you
gosh darn girl you really haven’t a clue
passionate this love seeps
so very deep for only you
so tell me now, why pass
on a heart forever true?
Baby, my sassy, tasty, sexy honey dove
on this earth, you’ll find no greater love
prefect would be our fit, a hand within a glove
tenderly we'd kiss, ascending to the clouds above
Oh please, oh please will you be my darling valentine
can’t you see, we were meant to be forever entwined
So please tell me now...will you be my sweet Valentine?
Published 10th Feb 2014
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Anonymous
10th Feb 2014 10:31pm
Yes, Yes, Yes I will!!! Since I have to share you with all the other beauties on DU, can I have at least one dance? LOL!!! Enjoyed! Xo :)
10th Feb 2014 10:42pm
Lmao aaaawwww why yes, sure! Uhm can you
do the electric slide? lol thank u sweetheart, truly appreciate you much :)
do the electric slide? lol thank u sweetheart, truly appreciate you much :)
11th Feb 2014 2:46am
11th Feb 2014 2:47am
Thank you my sweetness! I'm happy you lined it
n truly appreciate your continued support :)
n truly appreciate your continued support :)
Anonymous
11th Feb 2014 2:52am
aww that's so sweet and i thought you'd never ask lol
the answer is yes! :))
Happy Valentines day PIKM, with lots of love!
the answer is yes! :))
Happy Valentines day PIKM, with lots of love!
11th Feb 2014 5:06am
Well I was scared becuz I'm soooooo shy! lol
Thank you my sweetie, happy Valentines day to you too :)
appreciate you much :)
Thank you my sweetie, happy Valentines day to you too :)
appreciate you much :)
11th Feb 2014 8:30am
11th Feb 2014 11:54am
Lmao hey I'd never beat women, unless they wanted that! lol
appreciate the smile n support sweet lady :)
appreciate the smile n support sweet lady :)
11th Feb 2014 2:51pm
11th Feb 2014 6:24pm
11th Feb 2014 6:58pm
With a beautiful poem like that I would only ever be able to say "YES" to you..... very sweet and lovely write to the one who is meant to be forever yours.... ;) <3
11th Feb 2014 11:48pm
Aaaawwww listen to ya! Thank you sweetie
n yea c'mon then! lol appreciate ur support so much :)
n yea c'mon then! lol appreciate ur support so much :)
11th Feb 2014 10:11pm
12th Feb 2014 3:01pm
I locked his ass up in the closet as payback for dissing me as a kid! lmao... Thanks a ton bro. Appreciate you :)
11th Feb 2014 10:43pm
Oh, your bed is crowded by now, huh? Well, otherwise I'd say yes, too, but ...
Hey! A sweet and romantic Valentine's poem! Like it!
Hey! A sweet and romantic Valentine's poem! Like it!
12th Feb 2014 3:02pm
Nah not even close, so c'mere woman! lol
Thank you always for your wonderful support :)
Thank you always for your wonderful support :)
12th Feb 2014 2:31am
That is one of the sweetest Valentine poems I've ever read... you are a true romantic.. :)I hope your Valentines Day overflows with sultry romance.
12th Feb 2014 3:08pm
Aaaaawwww n your comment is truly one the very sweetest I've ever gotten! Thank you, I'm blushing big time now lol
12th Feb 2014 1:26pm
12th Feb 2014 3:12pm
Thank you my sweetness! N yea? Then plz come on baby!
I'm waiting lol appreciate you much :)
I'm waiting lol appreciate you much :)
16th Feb 2014 1:57pm
16th Feb 2014 4:17pm
Thank you my Poetic powerhouse, I'm flattered n honored! :)
Appreciate u much :)
Appreciate u much :)
16th Feb 2014 4:20pm
Poe I missed your Valentine's day romantic beauty of a poem.. How could anyone resist you.. this poem put a big smile on my face thank you :) much love Crim
16th Feb 2014 4:51pm
Oh you'd be surprised! I'm largely ignored in life
those ppl who see me look thru me, so have no idea
if they'd like me or not n I don't throw myself on ppl...
Anyway, thank u sweetie pie, ur a GEM! :)
those ppl who see me look thru me, so have no idea
if they'd like me or not n I don't throw myself on ppl...
Anyway, thank u sweetie pie, ur a GEM! :)
16th Feb 2014 4:54pm
big hug Poe they're missing out on a deep soul and a very handsome man there loss love Brenda :)
16th Feb 2014 5:07pm
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