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Forgotten/Missing
Has he forgotten me, or is he missing me
Does he remember breathing my scent in
When he closes his eyes, can he see my face
As the wind blows, can he feel my touch, again
Whispering I love you, is he able to hear me
Does he remember breathing my scent in
When he closes his eyes, can he see my face
As the wind blows, can he feel my touch, again
Whispering I love you, is he able to hear me
Published 9th Feb 2014
| Edited 12th Feb 2014
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9th Feb 2014 4:58pm
Aww Tommie Lynn wht a profound piece and statement this is. every line here is absolutely beautiful. I can feel and see ur pain and loss
9th Feb 2014 5:10pm
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9th Feb 2014 5:31pm
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9th Feb 2014 5:36pm
Anonymous
10th Feb 2014 4:50pm
heza a listen' I'm sew shure missy rM
10th Feb 2014 5:24pm
12th Feb 2014 5:21am
He is listening. Be sure of this Tommie Lynn. Sometimes you can find you've wandered further than you think you have. It can take a little longer to get back home. XO
