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You're My Bitch, I'm You're Master
I'm so sick of you. You think you can
fuck me around for days. Weeks. I'm
so done with your bullshit. You treating
me like some dumb slut you can fuck
around. You think you can sweet talk
me into anything? Still use me whenever
you feel like it? No. You can't. I'm done,
baby. Done with you, your attitude, all
your disgusting friends. I've packed my
bags, honey. I'm leaving you. For real
this time and there ain't nothing you
can do. And from now on, you're my
slave, my bitch. Your ass is mine to
own and I will squeeze everything you
have out until there's nothing left but
your disease-ridden soul and when you
come crawling back to me. When you
need help? I'll laugh my ass off and send
you packing. I'm finished with your bullshit.
fuck me around for days. Weeks. I'm
so done with your bullshit. You treating
me like some dumb slut you can fuck
around. You think you can sweet talk
me into anything? Still use me whenever
you feel like it? No. You can't. I'm done,
baby. Done with you, your attitude, all
your disgusting friends. I've packed my
bags, honey. I'm leaving you. For real
this time and there ain't nothing you
can do. And from now on, you're my
slave, my bitch. Your ass is mine to
own and I will squeeze everything you
have out until there's nothing left but
your disease-ridden soul and when you
come crawling back to me. When you
need help? I'll laugh my ass off and send
you packing. I'm finished with your bullshit.
Published 8th Feb 2014
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9th Feb 2014 9:54am
So interesting how the use of "bitch" has changed over the years. At one point it was never used to identify a man, as the definition stuck close to the dictionary definition. Now people use the term like it is water, which may suggest the language has become more crude, but that is another story.
The disgust is well felt; the choice of words seems redundant but that may just be me being an old prude.
The disgust is well felt; the choice of words seems redundant but that may just be me being an old prude.
9th Feb 2014 10:19am
There are no rules when you use words. They're free to be used however I please and if I want to call a man a bitch, I will :)
9th Feb 2014 10:43am
Could you explain that to some of your country men who seem to be threatened by groups like Pussy Riot?
9th Feb 2014 12:07pm
I've tried. It's rather annoying. I thought Pussy Riot were brilliant in standing up and fighting for what they believed in.
9th Feb 2014 5:48pm
Wow Daniella this is powerful. I love how u stand up to this and his bullshit. beautiful write
10th Feb 2014 2:59am
25th Feb 2014 4:37am
Way to go! May I presume this was a life experience and not just a fiction? I love it through out, start to finish. Great read.
27th Feb 2014 11:03am
It's sad to say that most of these poems are life experiences. Thank you :3
