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Shattered~
my tongue stiffens with the thought of him
my heart freezes up turning my veins into
rope crystals
he has become my enemy injuring me every
chance he can, destroying every feeling I've
hoped for
my passionate hatred for him consumed me
wrapped it's cold hands around me humming
me to death
my heart freezes up turning my veins into
rope crystals
he has become my enemy injuring me every
chance he can, destroying every feeling I've
hoped for
my passionate hatred for him consumed me
wrapped it's cold hands around me humming
me to death
Published 2nd Feb 2014
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2nd Feb 2014 4:36pm
2nd Feb 2014 4:47pm
There's no love, just hate!Thank you for reading SJ, always a pleasure hearing your opinion. :)
2nd Feb 2014 4:52pm
2nd Feb 2014 5:37pm
Took the words right out of my mouth. He'll be alone, festering..I'll be happy. :)
2nd Feb 2014 4:53pm
Kick him in the nuts write
Glad they are not my nut
Have a feeling when you kick, you kick hard
Well done
Glad they are not my nut
Have a feeling when you kick, you kick hard
Well done
2nd Feb 2014 5:39pm
2nd Feb 2014 5:11pm
as always the fear of a love tht has been shattered. Emotions tht tighten the soul feeling a sensation of hate tht burns and keeps shattering more, rid the fear repain the cracks if not he'll eventually break ur spirit like ur heart. and I love this write very strong wht truth
2nd Feb 2014 5:43pm
He's broken everything that I am! I am determined to repair all the damage he's done. Thank you BS for reading me and for your words. :)
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