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.....tRiPpiNg OvEr mY hEarT.....
The raindrops are so small. They sound so soft against the windowpane. I step out of the car wrapped in a blanket of regret. Wondering if you even remember my name.
I turn around to yesterday, and right before me is your warm embrace. I see everything so clearly. Every movement, every touch, every sound, the softness of your lips upon my face.
Im startled from tomorrow, and turn to see whats in front of me. Its you. Your smile. Its your hand, cursed for not holding mine. But holding hers. Im afraid to go the extra mile. I see me, alone and bleeding. You were so deceiving, and yet I fell clumsily, tripping over my heart and not even moving yours.
I turn around to yesterday, and right before me is your warm embrace. I see everything so clearly. Every movement, every touch, every sound, the softness of your lips upon my face.
Im startled from tomorrow, and turn to see whats in front of me. Its you. Your smile. Its your hand, cursed for not holding mine. But holding hers. Im afraid to go the extra mile. I see me, alone and bleeding. You were so deceiving, and yet I fell clumsily, tripping over my heart and not even moving yours.
Published 19th Feb 2011
| Edited 1st Sep 2013
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19th Feb 2011 12:21pm
I love this line.....tripping over my heart and not even moving yours. Hate feeling this way and you put it in such creative words.
20th Feb 2011 6:13am
thank you splendid. i always try to come up with good metaphors and it dnt work but these ones just came to me q:
11th Mar 2011 9:20pm
this is great so full of emotion. you really conveyed your feelings of your sadness from missing someone and your repentance for past wrongs was shown in a very unique way. theres so many feelings packed in this poem. your feelings of jealousy, remorse, and anger. and it all blends together nicely. well done
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29th Apr 2011 8:26pm
You definitely have the gift of expression, I hope it always brings release to you when you need it. I love your poetry...honestly. Deceit, mistrust, manipulation often blind all of us, its what we learn from it and where we go from there that matters most.
1st May 2011 9:53pm
