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'Implanted Dreams'
There were once...in
hope filled hands a need
just a pair of seeds
that aspired to be...
budding into little flowers
united by the early morn' in glory
as they had arisen in the daylight's hour
yet, 'twas only the beginning of their story...
Instantly, they had felt such a power-pull
an urge to bond, destined to come together
against winds, and rains they fought through
battling the travails of all kinds of weather...
a struggle, that strength, to just hold on
never yielding, realigned, their resolve ever strong
now proud, and upwardly reaching, in full bloom
a song in their hearts, sighing at a glowing moon...
come sun they rise as the 'morning glories'
still, it proceeds, within this cycle a 'life story'
with each dawn a love soars, and swoons
as we see those former seedlings still do bloom.
hope filled hands a need
just a pair of seeds
that aspired to be...
budding into little flowers
united by the early morn' in glory
as they had arisen in the daylight's hour
yet, 'twas only the beginning of their story...
Instantly, they had felt such a power-pull
an urge to bond, destined to come together
against winds, and rains they fought through
battling the travails of all kinds of weather...
a struggle, that strength, to just hold on
never yielding, realigned, their resolve ever strong
now proud, and upwardly reaching, in full bloom
a song in their hearts, sighing at a glowing moon...
come sun they rise as the 'morning glories'
still, it proceeds, within this cycle a 'life story'
with each dawn a love soars, and swoons
as we see those former seedlings still do bloom.
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Re: 'Implanted Dreams'
30th Jan 2014 8:08pm
I love the journey of seeds being planted, rooted and like all things with the proper love and nurturing, they blossom and grow, even into dreams...
Beautiful, Poe! Xo
Beautiful, Poe! Xo
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re: Re: 'Implanted Dreams'
31st Jan 2014 5:40am
You nailed it my dear! n yea, things do indeed grow
stronger with love n nurturing... Thank you
sweetness, I appreciate you much :)
stronger with love n nurturing... Thank you
sweetness, I appreciate you much :)
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30th Jan 2014 11:03pm
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31st Jan 2014 12:45pm
Re: 'Implanted Dreams'
31st Jan 2014 1:25am
It reads quite romantically and enjoyed the reference to planting seeds and watching them grow!..... :)
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re: Re: 'Implanted Dreams'
31st Jan 2014 12:47pm
You frames of reference are quite good lady lol
Thank you so much my dear, appreciate your support always :)
Thank you so much my dear, appreciate your support always :)
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31st Jan 2014 5:27am
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31st Jan 2014 12:48pm
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31st Jan 2014 9:04am
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31st Jan 2014 12:50pm
OMG! You're back! Yay! lol you've been missed my dear lady
hope all is going well nowadays :)
hope all is going well nowadays :)
Re: 'Implanted Dreams'
31st Jan 2014 1:56pm
This is perfect poetic. I loved the way this was written. It really speaks to me. Good Job :)
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re: Re: 'Implanted Dreams'
31st Jan 2014 4:34pm
My sweet Raven, I've missed hearing from you! Thank you do much for the return, n your lovely comment, it means a lot to me... :)
Re: 'Implanted Dreams'
31st Jan 2014 4:02pm
Oh Wow!!! Deeply philosophical with this piece! you are the man, Poe!!!
Red
Red
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re: Re: 'Implanted Dreams'
1st Feb 2014 00:28am
Aaaawww Red, so sweet you are, but hey YOU are the WOMAN! :) n I appreciate you greatly :)
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1st Feb 2014 00:09am
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1st Feb 2014 12:11pm
Thank you Stormy, I'm grateful for your sweet comment n truly appreciate your time :)
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1st Feb 2014 1:53am
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1st Feb 2014 12:13pm
How sweetly your words fall on my page... Thank you much
lady, appreciate it a lot :)
lady, appreciate it a lot :)
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4th Feb 2014 6:33pm
Re: 'Implanted Dreams'
4th Feb 2014 8:03pm
great imagery, flawless flow, Absolutely Beautiful Ink Poetik!!! i truly enjoyed
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re: Re: 'Implanted Dreams'
4th Feb 2014 10:46pm
Oh sweetness, I adore you! Thank you so much for
such an amazing comment, humbled I am
as well as grateful for your continued support of my ink :)
such an amazing comment, humbled I am
as well as grateful for your continued support of my ink :)