deepundergroundpoetry.com
I'm Sorry, My Bad
Haloes of angels
on morning sunrays
shining off long hair
golden on her shoulder
She turns to see
and stare at me
seeing the envy
written on my face
How can a lady boy
be prettier than me
a natural born woman
and she just a fake
she walks past me
smirking into my face
as her penis tent
Her mini dress
on morning sunrays
shining off long hair
golden on her shoulder
She turns to see
and stare at me
seeing the envy
written on my face
How can a lady boy
be prettier than me
a natural born woman
and she just a fake
she walks past me
smirking into my face
as her penis tent
Her mini dress
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3
reading list entries 0
comments 9
reads 842
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
This poem
28th Jan 2014 1:34am
Re: I'm Sorry, My Bad
28th Jan 2014 10:50am
Cool write...just been watching TV series about Lady boys. Such lovely people!
But real beauty is in the eye of the beholder...or in the case of a friend ...the hand. ;-( .
It has damaged him for life. [Boogie Street in the 70s]
Also takes a lot of hormones which screw up the body big time in many cases.[TV expert]
Your beauty shows in your writing Grace...keep going.
Terry
But real beauty is in the eye of the beholder...or in the case of a friend ...the hand. ;-( .
It has damaged him for life. [Boogie Street in the 70s]
Also takes a lot of hormones which screw up the body big time in many cases.[TV expert]
Your beauty shows in your writing Grace...keep going.
Terry
0

re: Re: I'm Sorry, My Bad
28th Jan 2014 2:07pm
Its Bugis Street if you are in Singapore, Terry. Or Burgos if you are in Makati, Philippines...in this case it was somewhere in Bangkok. Thank you for reading, very kind of you to visit.
re: re: Re: I'm Sorry, My Bad
28th Jan 2014 2:23pm
Some Americans referred to it as "Boogie Street" in the wake of the 1970s disco craze. [Wiki]
plus I was playing with words. Didn't the film Boogie Nights also get its name from these places?
plus I was playing with words. Didn't the film Boogie Nights also get its name from these places?
0

re: re: re: Re: I'm Sorry, My Bad
28th Jan 2014 2:29pm
Some people mispronounces, with the silent s thing. I havent the foggiest on the Boogie Night film though.:)
Re: I'm Sorry, My Bad
28th Jan 2014 2:10pm
:D A chuckle to the morning Dear Grace-Witty-Good luck in the comp:)
0

re: Re: I'm Sorry, My Bad
28th Jan 2014 2:19pm
Re: I'm Sorry, My Bad
28th Jan 2014 9:11pm
Very intriguing write.....
Have to look up some of the references.......
Much enjoyed..... :)
Have to look up some of the references.......
Much enjoyed..... :)
0

re: Re: I'm Sorry, My Bad
28th Jan 2014 9:31pm