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lurking in your tangled hair
would have kissed you harder
deeper
you kept me slightly at bay
next time will be different
passion collision
no fault
mouth on mouth
only coming up for air
no deposit, no return
lurking in your tangled hair
in your rear view mirror
on line at the bank
while cooking eggs
deeper
you kept me slightly at bay
next time will be different
passion collision
no fault
mouth on mouth
only coming up for air
no deposit, no return
lurking in your tangled hair
in your rear view mirror
on line at the bank
while cooking eggs
Published 20th Jan 2014
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20th Jan 2014 10:46pm
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20th Jan 2014 11:17pm
Anonymous
20th Jan 2014 10:58pm
I like the word 'lurking', rather than the other word, this definitely gives depth to the feelings of desire.
20th Jan 2014 11:16pm
20th Jan 2014 11:44pm
You always leave me wanting more, your fast verse heats my eyes and then it's over.
Love it
x
Love it
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21st Jan 2014 00:01am
That's to keep you coming back for more ...
Kind of like the great guitar solo, you want it to go on forever.
You fill my soul Glass
xoxo
Speak
Kind of like the great guitar solo, you want it to go on forever.
You fill my soul Glass
xoxo
Speak
21st Mar 2015 6:25pm
21st Mar 2015 6:29pm
Mmmmm
Yes
Another fav
You have eyes just like her
Same shape and color
Sometimes I think you are her
Yes
Another fav
You have eyes just like her
Same shape and color
Sometimes I think you are her
22nd Mar 2015 7:13am
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