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Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
Hey baby, yo won't you come here,
let me whisper in ya ear...
I want you to know my dear
just what’s been on my mind
a more passionate lover?
baby that, you’ll never find
you see these things
I'm here to tell you
is with absolute conviction
Mmmmmm let me taste those tender lips
my sweet little closet vixen
N' will you tell me
if you like it when I blow in your ear
n' kiss your neck
yea baby you got the cards,
but I stacked the deck
So how about you remove your nightgown
so I can pick you up, then lay you down
"But we in the kitchen" you tell me softly
woman you make me hot,
so there ain’t no stopping me
I’ll just take my time...
to drink in your beautiful eyes
Ha ha, bet you didn’t see that cummin’!
as you hint, what a surprise...
Still, If you wanna know
how all this will make you feel
Just relax and let loose,
this passion in which you reel is real
N' You might think at times
I’m getting a bit rough,
less romantic
but baby you deal with it,
because you're made of some tough stuff
Our wet bodies joined together, oh so so tight
You scream, "Oh...Aaaagghhh, dear lord!"
sweet love, better hold on with all your might
So tell me now...
do you kinda like how this is soundin?
Good baby...Open 'Says me'
n' prepare yourself
for some good love poundin!'…
let me whisper in ya ear...
I want you to know my dear
just what’s been on my mind
a more passionate lover?
baby that, you’ll never find
you see these things
I'm here to tell you
is with absolute conviction
Mmmmmm let me taste those tender lips
my sweet little closet vixen
N' will you tell me
if you like it when I blow in your ear
n' kiss your neck
yea baby you got the cards,
but I stacked the deck
So how about you remove your nightgown
so I can pick you up, then lay you down
"But we in the kitchen" you tell me softly
woman you make me hot,
so there ain’t no stopping me
I’ll just take my time...
to drink in your beautiful eyes
Ha ha, bet you didn’t see that cummin’!
as you hint, what a surprise...
Still, If you wanna know
how all this will make you feel
Just relax and let loose,
this passion in which you reel is real
N' You might think at times
I’m getting a bit rough,
less romantic
but baby you deal with it,
because you're made of some tough stuff
Our wet bodies joined together, oh so so tight
You scream, "Oh...Aaaagghhh, dear lord!"
sweet love, better hold on with all your might
So tell me now...
do you kinda like how this is soundin?
Good baby...Open 'Says me'
n' prepare yourself
for some good love poundin!'…
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Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in to Ear...
20th Jan 2014 2:13am
Nothin wrong with a kitchen feast brother. Keeping it hot My Poe'. Rock on!!
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re: Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in to Ear...
20th Jan 2014 2:20am
Kitchen, closet, bedroom, bathroom, car... Who cares!? lol
but yea you're right, nothing wrong at all! Thanks bro. I try :) appreciate you much dude :)
but yea you're right, nothing wrong at all! Thanks bro. I try :) appreciate you much dude :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 2:28am
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20th Jan 2014 2:30am
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20th Jan 2014 2:33am
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20th Jan 2014 2:35am
Sweetness you ain't Neva lie! lol
Thank you, truly appreciate your time n thoughts :)
Thank you, truly appreciate your time n thoughts :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 2:50am
'Prepare yourself for some good love poundin.' Saweeeeet! Every girl can use a little love poundin every now nd then.
But more so NOW! Lol
But more so NOW! Lol
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re: Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 3:07am
Aaaawwww trust me, plenty of us GUYS can use
good loving too! lol... Thank you, I'm happy you liked n truly appreciate your thoughts :)
good loving too! lol... Thank you, I'm happy you liked n truly appreciate your thoughts :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 2:50am
What a hot piece!
Loved the line,
"Mmmmmm let me taste those tender lips
my sweet little closet vixen"
Nice feisty ink!
Loved the line,
"Mmmmmm let me taste those tender lips
my sweet little closet vixen"
Nice feisty ink!
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re: Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 3:12am
Mmmmm the way you said it back is more hotter lol
Thank you sweetie :) appreciate you!
Thank you sweetie :) appreciate you!
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 3:37am
She wouldn't be making any objections about being taken in the kitchen! Would of had me at 'let me whisper in your ear'. Ooh, the hot pieces never cease with you! Awesome job!
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re: Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 11:47am
Lmao she wouldn't huh? Lol thank you sweetie
ur wonderful, appreciate ur support :)
ur wonderful, appreciate ur support :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 6:40am
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20th Jan 2014 11:51am
Aaaawwww well come a lil closer! psst, blah blah blah...etc etc... Lol thank you so much my dear, grateful I am
Do you hear? lol
Do you hear? lol
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 6:46am
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20th Jan 2014 11:52am
Sir L, I'm happy you liked n I thank you kindly bro! much appreciated always :)
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20th Jan 2014 6:57am
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re: Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 11:54am
Mmmmmm, hold on I need to suckle that soft beautiful neck first!! Mmmmm yummy! Ok now I'm ready lol thank you sweetness I truly appreciate your support always! :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 8:31am
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20th Jan 2014 11:57am
Mmmmmmm I'm happy it felt that way for you, mind if I remove some of that clothing for ya? lol thank you my sweetness, grateful for your support :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 9:14am
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20th Jan 2014 12:05pm
Wow, they do? c'mere then n let me do some more lol
Thank you my sweet mami, always truly grateful for all your support :)
Thank you my sweet mami, always truly grateful for all your support :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 1:58pm
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22nd Jan 2014 00:56am
Aaawww many humble thanks to you my brother
Truly n grateful for your support :)
Truly n grateful for your support :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 5:07pm
Sexy, I felt like I was peeking in on a very intimate moment.. Love it :)
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re: Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
Peeking in? U should came in! Two's company
But Three is Heavenly! lol thank u sweetie, appreciate you much :)
But Three is Heavenly! lol thank u sweetie, appreciate you much :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 7:02pm
Well Damn!!!! Yousa' naughty man! Ssshhh, your secret is save with me.....Xo
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20th Jan 2014 9:10pm
Lmao who me? Nah I'm innocent I swear!
lol... Thank you my sweet Rain, always grateful
for a visit n ur sweetness! :)
lol... Thank you my sweet Rain, always grateful
for a visit n ur sweetness! :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 8:18pm
Uuhh ... such a sexy write, Poe!
Our wet bodies joined together, oh so so tight
You scream, "Oh...Aaaagghhh, dear lord!"
sweet love, better hold on with all your might
That's so hot!
Our wet bodies joined together, oh so so tight
You scream, "Oh...Aaaagghhh, dear lord!"
sweet love, better hold on with all your might
That's so hot!
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re: Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
20th Jan 2014 9:12pm
Aaaawww you're sounding pretty hot
in your review here my sweetheart :) thank you
so much. :)
in your review here my sweetheart :) thank you
so much. :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
21st Jan 2014 8:55pm
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22nd Jan 2014 00:59am
Lmao you do huh?? well how bout on top of a car? Or in the bathroom atop of the sink? Or... Lmao... Oh Yea thank you
so much sweetie, truly appreciate your support :)
so much sweetie, truly appreciate your support :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
22nd Jan 2014 4:56am
"So how about you remove your nightgown
so I can pick you up, then lay you down "
whew!!! Smoking Hot Ink Poetik...enjoyed!!
so I can pick you up, then lay you down "
whew!!! Smoking Hot Ink Poetik...enjoyed!!
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re: Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
22nd Jan 2014 1:50pm
Thank you my sweet lady, I'm truly happy you liked it, n deeply appreciate you always :)
Re: Ssshhh, I wanna Whisper in yo Ear...
6th Feb 2014 6:10am
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6th Feb 2014 11:50am
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed n truly grateful for your time n thoughts :)