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Don't Care (mmm oh yeah)
How do I tell you I so don't care,
(meant to be a no strings affair...)
I swear it's true
...so true
These little bubbles
kinda want you there
No need to worry though,
(I'll lie too)
I won't let them get to you.
mmm oh yeah...
Stop your talk, lets get down
tie me up, spank me, won't make a sound.
got me feeling so high
all this crazy fooling around.
How do I tell you I so don't care,
Stop it with your "come suck me here" stare
I swear it's true
...so true
these little bubbles
kinda want you there
No need to worry though,
(I'll lie too)
I won't let them get to you.
mmm oh yeah...
We'll keep fucking nice
because you taste like dessert
You feel the heat too
so this is what I'll do...
How do I tell you
I so don't care...
mmm oh yeah.
(meant to be a no strings affair...)
I swear it's true
...so true
These little bubbles
kinda want you there
No need to worry though,
(I'll lie too)
I won't let them get to you.
mmm oh yeah...
Stop your talk, lets get down
tie me up, spank me, won't make a sound.
got me feeling so high
all this crazy fooling around.
How do I tell you I so don't care,
Stop it with your "come suck me here" stare
I swear it's true
...so true
these little bubbles
kinda want you there
No need to worry though,
(I'll lie too)
I won't let them get to you.
mmm oh yeah...
We'll keep fucking nice
because you taste like dessert
You feel the heat too
so this is what I'll do...
How do I tell you
I so don't care...
mmm oh yeah.
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Re: Don't Care (mmm oh yeah)
16th Jan 2014 4:46am
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16th Jan 2014 6:50am
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16th Jan 2014 4:48am
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16th Jan 2014 4:53am
Mmmmm I wouldn't care either as long as I'm having this yumminess lol... A sensual n heated ink!
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16th Jan 2014 6:51am
Re: Don't Care (mmm oh yeah)
16th Jan 2014 11:47am
Mmmm, oh yeah! That's it right there. Though as much as I've pretended. There's always a part that cares. But once you've had a taste..hmm. Oh yeah! What hope a there? Nice spill Ms Heart. Thanking you.
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re: Re: Don't Care (mmm oh yeah)
16th Jan 2014 12:24pm
Thank you Mr. Sway... You're right, there's always a part that cares. Appreciate you stopping by x
Re: Don't Care (mmm oh yeah)
16th Jan 2014 1:09pm
Like the format and subject matter, unique write Heart of Glass. Very interesting read
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re: Re: Don't Care (mmm oh yeah)
16th Jan 2014 11:35pm
Thank you for your comments, it was an interesting time to be exposed :)
Re: Don't Care (mmm oh yeah)
16th Jan 2014 1:36pm
Hot and kinda rough and tumble verse
Glass is taking care of business in a sly connective kind of way.
Good flow. Power write.
Glass is taking care of business in a sly connective kind of way.
Good flow. Power write.
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16th Jan 2014 11:37pm
Re: Don't Care (mmm oh yeah)
16th Jan 2014 5:03pm
"mmm oh yeah..." while those words made me think of several Beatles' songs, the rest made me think of Lil Kim!
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16th Jan 2014 11:35pm
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16th Jan 2014 11:21pm
"come suck me here"
stare
I swear it's true
you need it badly young gal
are u an Aussie
stare
I swear it's true
you need it badly young gal
are u an Aussie
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Re: Don't Care (mmm oh yeah)
16th Jan 2014 11:37pm
i have many Aussie poets as friends
that's why
and ur so musical a gal
that's all to asking young maid
that's why
and ur so musical a gal
that's all to asking young maid
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re: Re: Don't Care (mmm oh yeah)
16th Jan 2014 11:38pm
Oh ok, fair enough; I just thought it was an interesting question to ask :)
Thank you for connecting!!
Thank you for connecting!!
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16th Jan 2014 11:56pm
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17th Jan 2014 7:40am
mmm yah I do care about this piece wow I love how u do tht I can feel the yearn of ur lust tht and the bubbles tht lure in to just pop off with carelessness ooh ur bad I love it
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