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In my heart I cry
Braided strands of crystals
pull me outside of myself,
blue haze engulfs around
my head, I inhale the vapors
blowing it out into the cold
air seeing my breath swirl
around in puffs and streams,
in my heart I cry
Sound stolen from my frost
covered lips as the aching
wind kisses me fiercely,
clouding my thoughts with
stinging bitterness, the sound
of bones cracking echo through
the rubber trees bouncing
back into me,
in my heart I cry
Crystals feather out in the frigid
spaces, tips with frosted edges
cut like glass when touched, I
bleed as my heart skips a beat
wondering how something so
beautiful can cause such pain,
than I think of my love,
in my heart I cry
pull me outside of myself,
blue haze engulfs around
my head, I inhale the vapors
blowing it out into the cold
air seeing my breath swirl
around in puffs and streams,
in my heart I cry
Sound stolen from my frost
covered lips as the aching
wind kisses me fiercely,
clouding my thoughts with
stinging bitterness, the sound
of bones cracking echo through
the rubber trees bouncing
back into me,
in my heart I cry
Crystals feather out in the frigid
spaces, tips with frosted edges
cut like glass when touched, I
bleed as my heart skips a beat
wondering how something so
beautiful can cause such pain,
than I think of my love,
in my heart I cry
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Re: In my heart I cry
14th Jan 2014 7:35pm
Aaaaaawwwwww my sweet beautiful Tommie!
This breaks my heart n made me cry... Such a sadness in this ink, but I admit it was written with a gentle beauty...
This breaks my heart n made me cry... Such a sadness in this ink, but I admit it was written with a gentle beauty...
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re: Re: In my heart I cry
14th Jan 2014 9:30pm
Re: In my heart I cry
14th Jan 2014 7:58pm
as I said once before
positivity breeds more and more
negativity anchors us all
ur take
i can only say
u have to bake
We all can only partake
positivity breeds more and more
negativity anchors us all
ur take
i can only say
u have to bake
We all can only partake
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re: Re: In my heart I cry
14th Jan 2014 9:31pm
Re: In my heart I cry
14th Jan 2014 8:51pm
The comparison of the stark beauty of a Winter's day and the pain one suffers in its appreciation and enjoyment is a striking metaphor for the beauty of being in love and the pain and heartache it often inflicts. There is much living wisdom in your words.
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re: Re: In my heart I cry
14th Jan 2014 9:34pm
You're spot on, chip, chip cheerio and all that stuff LMAO, I thank you for your kind words GW.
re: re: Re: In my heart I cry
14th Jan 2014 9:38pm
I'm more of a Raisin Bran guy :D It is my pleasure to read what you're shared.
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Re: In my heart I cry
Anonymous
14th Jan 2014 9:19pm
nyclee dun poeitess! RM
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re: Re: In my heart I cry
14th Jan 2014 9:34pm
Re: In my heart I cry
15th Jan 2014 6:31pm
A cold love that bleeds from a crystallized soul as the heart crystallizing for such wow awesome
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re: Re: In my heart I cry
15th Jan 2014 6:56pm
Re: In my heart I cry
15th Jan 2014 7:57pm
Captivated from the start with such creative word play dancing throughout this piece, to find myself done reading but entangled in the thoughts of love and all that it comes with.
Just wonderful
Just wonderful
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re: Re: In my heart I cry
15th Jan 2014 9:10pm
Your words mean alot....I appreciate you reading me,thank you Awakenedsoul.
Re: In my heart I cry
16th Jan 2014 5:06am
*exhaling sharply* this is beautiful, w/it's colors & textures, the enveloping winter, love's flame extinguished...
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re: Re: In my heart I cry
16th Jan 2014 6:12am
Re: In my heart I cry
21st Jan 2014 6:41am
This is a poem where the words speak feelings...I'm left with this feeling of a contemplation of the heart.
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re: Re: In my heart I cry
21st Jan 2014 6:49am