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One cheating cunt
I’m a jet death mother-fucker with cunts for eyes
I’ve smoked satans pole and I’ve cum in his eyes
I’m out here laying in the black of your mind
Fucking with your pink bits one more time
I’m nobodies lover and every ones slut
Your mind is my doorway when reason is shut
When the race isn’t over I’m well out in front
But if ever I win one I’m one cheating cunt
Take what I give you or run like a bitch
If my hate was money the world’d be rich
Lay back and love what I spray on these pages
And I’ll go down a history, a bitch for the ages
I’ve smoked satans pole and I’ve cum in his eyes
I’m out here laying in the black of your mind
Fucking with your pink bits one more time
I’m nobodies lover and every ones slut
Your mind is my doorway when reason is shut
When the race isn’t over I’m well out in front
But if ever I win one I’m one cheating cunt
Take what I give you or run like a bitch
If my hate was money the world’d be rich
Lay back and love what I spray on these pages
And I’ll go down a history, a bitch for the ages
Published 13th Feb 2011
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13th Feb 2011 11:48pm
14th Feb 2011 00:51am
Ah yes....I see this is your standard comment, so I'll consider my work fatally flawed in its mediocrity...
I'm no writer..so my comments reflect that..your poem was exceptional and wicked..Crimsin
14th Feb 2011 6:05am
I love that line "I’m nobodies lover and every ones slut" It's really good and deep.
14th Feb 2011 9:44am
I can usually tell what's coming in a rhyme, but this felt completely unexpected; i didn't even realize that the first two lines both ended in "eyes" until the second read!
"Your mind is my doorway when reason is shut"- favourite line.
and that ending was great for this. Keep it up.
"Your mind is my doorway when reason is shut"- favourite line.
and that ending was great for this. Keep it up.
14th Feb 2011 9:45am
Oh. I didn't notice either. Now I feel terrible. Curse my fingers...curse them to hell....
I shall consult a thesaurus :=)
I shall consult a thesaurus :=)
14th Feb 2011 10:08am
It's just funny, aggressive progression from beginning to end. It gets better with each line. Well done.
14th Feb 2011 12:04pm
In my country humour has been illegal for over 200 hundred years, so naturally I am shocked that you would accuse me of such things...God bless the interweb...
