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Haiku love
Deepness of your mind
True attachment to your soul
Love is happiness
answer to Gabi's haiku eyes : http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/143919-haiku-eyes/
Published 7th Jan 2014
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7th Jan 2014 12:41pm
Anonymous
7th Jan 2014 4:15pm
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7th Jan 2014 4:18pm
Anonymous
8th Jan 2014 00:54am
Beautifully done
Your skills grow every day
Writing heart's desire
:)
Your skills grow every day
Writing heart's desire
:)
As Aristote said "for instance, men become builders by building houses, harpers by playing on the harp"... in french, we say : "c'est en forgeant que l'on devient forgeron" ("it is by forging that one becomes a blacksmith")! I think because of practice Haiku and poetry, I am growing for writting them... And with help of some nice poet-friends in DUP!!!
Thank you Petit_Minou! And thank you for all of those help me kindly and patiently!
Thank you Petit_Minou! And thank you for all of those help me kindly and patiently!
Anonymous
8th Jan 2014 6:30am
and happiness is love :)
Nice and sweet haiku of love, I like the simplicity of it Malin.
Nice and sweet haiku of love, I like the simplicity of it Malin.
Yes, "happiness is love"... I thank, in the previous comment to Petit_Minou, all who help me for a best practice in writting haiku and poetry, you are concerned, Vee, highly concerned...
12th Jan 2014 8:56pm
15th Jan 2014 4:13pm
There is just something about haiku where we just attach more to it, but it was alright.
15th Jan 2014 5:46pm
I don't understand exactly what is the problem, but thank you to take time to read my poetry!
