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Senryu 5-7-6 (2014-01-06) : Gabi
Love me forever
My heart beats strongly for you
Our love needs trust
Published 6th Jan 2014
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6th Jan 2014 9:48am
i marvel at both the simplicity and complex nature of this style. a wonderful write Malin.
6th Jan 2014 10:23am
I love this form, because of the purety of style needs! And because english is not my native language, I think it is easyer for me to write with this form! But I'll write other form of poem...
Thank you, Mia, for your comment!
Thank you, Mia, for your comment!
Anonymous
7th Jan 2014 7:36am
Pure and heartfelt Malin,.very well expressed, this love is true :)
7th Jan 2014 8:03am
