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Acceptance
The ruin
Has become
A way of life
I’m fated
In crumbs
I live on the edge of a knife
Denial
Ever burns
Deep in my heart
Desire
Fire turns
When loneliness begins to start
The fire
Flickering
Can’t fight off cold
The chilling,
Freezing
Wind quickly takes its toll
Acceptance
Of creeping death
Gives me solace
The longing
Of last breath
My heart quickly slows its pace
In the wild
Hills of Earth
Roll of the dice
I have lost
No rebirth
I am entombed in the ice
Has become
A way of life
I’m fated
In crumbs
I live on the edge of a knife
Denial
Ever burns
Deep in my heart
Desire
Fire turns
When loneliness begins to start
The fire
Flickering
Can’t fight off cold
The chilling,
Freezing
Wind quickly takes its toll
Acceptance
Of creeping death
Gives me solace
The longing
Of last breath
My heart quickly slows its pace
In the wild
Hills of Earth
Roll of the dice
I have lost
No rebirth
I am entombed in the ice
Published 6th Jan 2014
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6th Jan 2014 4:40pm
6th Jan 2014 5:22pm
I really dig how the poem just flows.
... accepting death when there's no going back...
The rhyming pattern almost made it seem like a symphonic metal parody...
Great Write Hades!!
Darker
... accepting death when there's no going back...
The rhyming pattern almost made it seem like a symphonic metal parody...
Great Write Hades!!
Darker
6th Jan 2014 7:04pm
6th Jan 2014 9:25pm
entombed in ice, very rad depiction.
find the light that melts the ice and calms the fire...
find the light that melts the ice and calms the fire...
